TOEFL® essay topic: The most important problem that the Earth is faced with?

[Darkangel12891]

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TOPIC: the most important problem that the Earth is faced with?

Over the past few decays, the Earth has to endure the chain of difficulties. Each one causes its badly great impact on human being such as diseases, famine, terrorism, etc and has been raging for sometimes now. In my opinion, it is an article of the faith that the most formidable problem we are facing is terrorism and AIDS.
Firstly, we could not be able to forget our memorable event happening at a day of 11/9. The video reporting the images when two airplanes got into the building has made one of the most destroyable scenes in our human’s history. We are all human and thus those activities are unacceptable. Whatever the reason may be for terrorism, it may be the conflict about religion, it also may be resulted from the united state’s invasion to Iraq. Hence, to solve these deadly activities requires several vital methods to balance our word religion and help decrease the serious atmosphere between countries and religious organizations.
Apart from the terrorism, we cannot deny the fact that AIDS is now becoming as uncontrolled problem. And history has it in abundance to prove this. It obviously states that AIDS is an incurable disease. So, it would be the last disease chosen if we had to experience one. In some cases when people get AIDS, they easily convey this kind of disease to too many people nearby which are in three ways: blood, child-mother interaction within the period of pregnancy and lastly sexual activity. By comparing this kind of disease to others, we of course recognize how dangerous the AIDS is since its amount of death is much more than other kinds of disease. To be honest, we have been experiencing some method to cure efficiently ourselves of AIDS. But it is far and few between.
After still taking all consideration, I would again claim that AIDS and terrorism are the most important problems for us to pay attention to. With the development of technology, one may hope, we probably rub out the virus so called AIDS. Besides, with several affections from residents all around the world, we can gradually make Earth a better a place for living with regard to our permanent feature.

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[Happytofita]

You posted the same topic twice. Why is that? :roll: