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Essay: Fear is a difficult problem to overtake; it grips minds of many of us.



 
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fear. comment or give your opinion. #1 (permalink) Sat Jun 27, 2009 18:41 pm   fear. comment or give your opinion.
 

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Fear is a difficult problem to overtake; it grips minds of many of us. Fear prevents people from achieving success and kills any opportunity or chances in life. As a result, People lose the sense of life. However, they attempt to overcome their fears which come in variety of types. Some common fears are: fear of failure, fear of dying, and fear of loneliness.
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Essay: Fear is a difficult problem to overtake; it grips minds of many of us. #2 (permalink) Sun Jun 28, 2009 6:10 am   Essay: Fear is a difficult problem to overtake; it grips minds of many of us.
 

Fear is a difficult problem to overtake; it grips minds of many of us. Fear prevents people from achieving success and kills any opportunity or chances in life. As a result, People lose the sense of life. However, they attempt to overcome their fears which come in variety of types, some common fears are: fear of failure and fear of loneliness…

Failure has never been a mistake but an experience. Most successful people in the world fail many times before arriving at their success. For example, Tomas Edison failed ninety-nine times before inventing the light bulb, these fails or rather series of experiences led him to an outstanding innovation. Therefore, life is based on learning and trying small experiences that give birth to the big success. For this reason, scared people of failure should change their mind and input new instructions that bear strong motives because inside them there is their real character which hopes to find out new things.

Fear of loneliness is another nightmare despite it does not deserve to be frightened of. Since individuals are naturally social, it ought to be understood that feeling of loneliness is mere phantom. To believe in that, people should make a good relation with themselves and enjoy making relationships with other people. As well, it is important to believe or build their social communication skills. Thereafter, life should be taken easy and loving it in order to receive the same feeling because that is the way to exclude loneliness.

To sum up this essay, absolute fear is really a psychological problem that stays people out of feeling the sense of life. In fact, variety of types of fear like fear of failure and fear of loneliness makes it a tough problematic issue; moreover, scared people have opportunity to solve their problems because solutions are not far.
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i would be grateful, if someone correct this essay. #3 (permalink) Sun Jun 28, 2009 8:00 am   i would be grateful, if someone correct this essay.
 

Fear is a difficult problem to over(come); it grips (the)minds of many of us.
Fear prevents people from achieving success and kills any opportunity or chances in (their lives.). As a result, (p)eople lose the sense of life. However, they attempt to overcome their fears which come in variety of types, some common fears are: fear of failure and fear of loneliness…

Failure has never been a mistake but an experience. Most successful people in the world fail many times before arriving at their success.
For example, T(h)omas Edison failed ninety-nine times before inventing the light bulb. (T)hese fail(ures), or rather series of experiences, led him to an outstanding innovation. Therefore, life is based on learning and trying small experiences that give birth to the big success. For this reason, people scared of failure should change their mind(s), and input new instructions that bear strong motives, because inside (of) them there is their real character which hopes to find out new things.

Fear of loneliness is another nightmare (that) does not deserve (thinking about).
Since individuals are naturally social, it ought to be understood that (the)feeling of loneliness is (a)mere phantom.
To believe in that, people should (have) a good relation(ship) with themselves, and enjoy making relationships with other people. As well, it is important to believe or build their social communication skills. Thereafter, life should be taken easy because that is the way to exclude loneliness.

To sum up this essay, absolute fear is really a psychological problem that(prevents) people (enjoying their lives). In fact, (the many varieties)of fear, like (the)fear of failure and (the)fear of loneliness makes it a tough problematic issue; moreover, scared people have (the)opportunity to solve their problems because (many)solutions are (readily available.)

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fear. comment or give your opinion. #4 (permalink) Sun Jun 28, 2009 18:39 pm   fear. comment or give your opinion.
 

Hello,

Whenever I fear something it does not happen at all. For example, when I have a fear of failure, I don't fail (apart from what you called fear of death. it will certainly happen whether you fear it or not). This makes me think of fear as a prerequisite of success. ( at least for me) :D

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