Gramatically correct? - Dear Mr. Eisenstadt, I am writing to inform you of the...

[Vagalsa]

Could someone check if the letter below is gramatically correct?

Dear Mr. Eisenstadt:

I am writing to inform you of the completion of my most recent screenplay, Trust Me, and my intent to obtain representation. The script is intended to be for a feature-length comedy. Two rich, eccentric, marijuana-loving brothers have led a life of leisure for many years, and now one of them wants to get his act together; much to the other's surprise. The primary setting is Boston, MA. I wrote the screenplay while living in the area, and incorporated my knowledge of the surroundings in my writing. If you are interested in reading my script, please email me at samm53@gmail.com, or call me at (353) 226-9132. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Regards,

Sam D. Vail

[Iraqi]

I think this post should be put in the "English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms" section.

Anyway, if I am up to having a say here, I found nothing that needs correction, except for the title of the play. It should better be enclosed in inverted commas (double or single) or brackets, etc or even written in italic, bold, etc- and not in commas.

Regards.

[Kitosdad]

The script is intended to be for a feature-length comedy.

"for" not needed.
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