The only way to improve your writing skills.

[Kitosdad]

The only way to improve your writing skills, is to write and display your work for correction.
To copy text from a book or black-board is fine for improving your spelling and handwriting skills, but the only real test is to submit your own work and thoughts for
correction and comment... so get to it!

Write a short essay or story which can be viewed and commented upon. This is the only way to check your improvement.

Kitos.
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[Rosario]

Hello Kitosdad,

I agree with your comments.

Is this forum permit us to send a short story?

Regards

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Rosario. Of course you can. I'm looking forward to reading it.

Kitos.
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[Someone]

Once upon a time... :-D
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Please do not hesitate to correct my language mistakes.

[Hannahpierre]

hehehe..........

[Rosario]

Hello Kitosdad,

Please correct my English (example letter)
My name is Li, I graduated from Economic field management in 2007 from Dr.W university.
I have been worked for several international and national agencies like ILO as an administration assistant, UNICEF as an administration manager, local ngo as a finance assistant.

I want to improve my English skill by communicate with foreign people and join this forum that very interesting.
I found this forum last month and decided to join here to increase my English knowledge. I believe that you all here will help me with my English problems.

Thanks for the correction
Regards,

[Kitosdad]

Hello Kitosdad,

Please correct my English (example letter)
My name is Li, I graduated from Economic field management in 2007 from Dr.W university.
I have worked for several international and national agencies like ILO as an administration assistant, UNICEF as an administration manager and my local ngo as a finance assistant.

I want to improve my English skill(s) by communicat(ing) with foreign people, and (have joined) this forum (as I find it) very interesting.
I found this forum last month and decided to join here to increase my English knowledge. I believe that everyone here will help me with my English problems.
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[Rosario]

Thank you Kitosdad.

Regards,

[Kitosdad]

Any time Rosario. :)
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[Rosario]

Hello Kitosdad,

Is possible for me to post my English writing again?

Thanks in advance.

Regards,

[MariaEbb]

I got an essay corrected once by an Englishman and he couln't find any grammar mistakes just linguistic mistakes....

What is most correct to write depends on the secord person who reads it. Even writers gets their books corrected by someone else or proofread as they call it.
/Maria

[Hannahpierre]

Can I post my essay's here, I want someone who can correct my english writing thank's

[Kitosdad]

Although it is permissible to post your essays here, it would be better to post them on the dedicated essays thread.

It is easier to find them there.
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[Indumohan81]

Could u help me in correcting this essay ?

· You have penfriend living in another country and he is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.

Ø Write a letter to your penfriend . In your letter

Ø Greet your friend and say why you are writing

Ø Briefly describe a news story in your country

Ø Explain why people are interested in it.

Dear Divin,

Hai Divin , how are you ? I am doing well in here. I hope your work is going well. I got your letter last week. I am very happy to heard about you and your country. In your letter mentioned you are very curious to learn about the major news items in our country. That is why I writing this letter to you.

The major news item in our country is accidents. Lot of accidents is occurred in this short period. Accidents are happening because of the careless driving, over speed and bad road facility.

Some people are doesn’t bother about others and other vehicle. Careless driving and overtaking are the major fact to occurring accidents. At the time of driving lot of people are try to use phone and smoking. It is lose our concentration and it become to accident.

Over speed is also a one of the cause to occur accident. Bad road facility , some were we can see the roads are damaged because of the rain and improper repairing . At the time of rainy season we can see lot of ponds are formed on the roads, because of it we can’t see the holes on the road . It is also the one of the cause to occur accident.

The above mentioned problems are the major cause to occur accident. The people are very interested in such type of activities like over speed, over taking and using mobile phones and smoking during driving. Because, I think they are not bother bout others and him self.



Yours loving friend,
vigen

[Kitosdad]

Dear Divin,

Hai Divin , how are you ? I am doing well in here IN GREECE?.
I hope your work is going well TOO. I got RECEIVED your letter last week. I am very happy to heard HEAR about you and your country.

In your letter YOU mentioned THAT you are very curious to learn about the major news items in our country. That is MY REASON IN/FOR writing this letter to you.

The major news itemS in our country is ARE ABOUT ROAD accidents.
LotS of accidents HAVE OCCURED in this short period. Accidents are happening MOSTLY OCCUR DUE TO because of the careless driving, over speedING and THE bad road facility SURFACES.

Some people are doesn’t ARE NOT botherED about other PEOPLE and other vehicleS. Careless driving and overtaking are the major factORS to occurring CONTRIBUTING TO accidents.
At the time of WHILST THEY ARE driving lotS of people are try to use
THEIR phoneS and smokE. It is lose our THIS LEADS TO A LOSS OF concentration and it become LEADS to accidentS TAKING PLACE.

Over SpeedING is also a one of the MAJOR causeS AS to WHY accidentS occur .
Bad road SURFACES THAT HAVE DETERIORATED DUE TO rain and improper repairing ARE ALSO OF MAJOR CONCERN.
At the time of IN THE rainy season we can see lotS of ponds are formed on the roads, because of it THEM we can’t see the holes In the road .
THIS IS ALSO A CAUSE OF MANY ACCIDENTS.

The above mentioned problems are the major causeS WHICH ALL LEAD TO accidentS.
The people are very interested in such typeS of activities like speedING, overtaking and using mobile phones and smoking during driving.
I think THESE DRIVERS are not botherED About THE SAFETY OF others OR EVEN THEIR OWN SAFETY.

Kitos.
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