A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested...

[Gurramrashmi]

Please review and correct my essay.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars.

Use examples and reasons to support your position.

Now days education is must. Day by day competition is increasing for coming generation. Those are competent and educated can survive otherwise not. In my view university education should not be free. There are many reasons for this.

One is students those who are interested for university education, at this level all are mentally and physically mature. So they are able to handle the situations. If university education has tuition fee students can manage it by doing part time job. In this way they can get the experience, knowledge and money as well. Hence I would like to say if university education has tuition fee that would encourage the students to work hard and manage it. In this way students not only get money but experience also.

Second is at university level students use expensive instruments and costly books. Therefore, if university has tuition fee it will provide best lab facilities and a good library. The rank of university is depends on lab facilities, university campus and library. A library which has good collection of books and room for students to study. In this case students will go to library and increase their knowledge not only in the field of academics in other fields also.

In addition to this if university has tuition fee it will provide good salary to faculties. In this situation teachers have enthusiasm for teaching. If teachers are good and they are honest towards their duty consequently result of students will be good and students will get good job.

In the nut shell I would like to say if university has tuition fee it will give us hard working students, good library, good campus and best teachers. I feel those students who have all these things would get the success in their life. In my view university students should not deny to give tuition fee because this is the way to achieve good career.

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[Kitosdad]

(Now(a)days) (a good) education is (a) must. Day by day competition is increasing for coming generation(s). Those (who) are competent and educated can survive, otherwise (they may) not. In my view university education should not be free. There are many reasons for this.

One is (that) students, those who are interested (in a ) university education at this level, are mentally and physically mature. So they are able to handle the situation.
If university education has tuition fee(s),( then the less well-off )students can manage (to earn) (them) by doing part time (work). In this way they can get the experience, knowledge and money as well.
Hence I would like to say if university education has tuition fee(s) that would encourage the students to work hard and (earn) (them). In this way students not only get money but experience also. (Too repetitive.)

Second is, at university level, students use expensive instruments and costly books. Therefore, if university has tuition fee(s) it will provide (the) best lab facilities and a good library. The rank of (a) university is depend(ant) (upon) (its) lab facilities, university campus and library. A library which has (a) good collection of books and room for students to study........ (unfinished)

In this case students will go to (the) library and increase their knowledge not only in the field of academics (but) in other fields also.

In addition to this, if university has tuition fee(s) it will provide (a) good salary to faculties. In this situation teachers (will) have (a greater) enthusiasm (toward) teaching.
If teachers are good, and they are honest towards their dut(ies), consequently (the)result(s) of students will be good and (the)students will get good job(s).

In (a) nut-shell, I would like to say if (a) university has tuition fee(s) it will give us hard working students (a) good library, (a) good campus and (the) best teachers.
I feel those students who have all (of) these things would (achieve)success in their li(ves). In my view university students should not (begrudge the paying of) tuition fee(s) because this is the way to achieve (a) good career.
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An unbelievable absence of articles. Please give more attention to this point.

Kitos.
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[Gurramrashmi]

Hi Kitos
Thanks for your efforts.
please tell me how can I improve use of articles.
Regards
Rashmi

[Kitosdad]

Just look at your own edited essay for examples.
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