TOEFL® essay: Some students like to take distance-learning courses by computer

[Gurramrashmi]

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Some students like to take distance-learning courses by computer. Other students prefer to study in traditional classroom settings with a teacher. Consider the advantages of both options, and make an argument for the way that students should organize their schedules.

Many people live on earth. Everybody has his own view. It does not matter whether you take distance-learning courses or study in traditional classroom settings. Only results matter. Both ways of studies have their own advantages. These are as follows.

First I would explain the advantages of distance-learning courses. In my perspective, a student who takes distance-learning courses can save their time and energy. Students do not go any where for study in distance-learning. So they can use that time for study. Even they do not waste their energy in commute. Therefore, they have more energy when they study. I also feel in distance-learning students can sat a schedule according to their convenience. In distance-learning students can listen the lectures many times and when ever they want. In this way they can understand the things very well.

While on the other hand, students those prefer to study in traditional classroom settings with a teacher also have many advantages. In my view, students those prefer to study in classroom with a teacher can solve any problem on the spot. Sometimes students may forget their problem if they do not have a teacher. So the problem remains and they do not make clear their confusions. If students study in classroom they become competent and friendly as well. In classroom study many students and teachers are available so students can discuss their future with them and aware from the good things. In classroom study students manage their schedule of study according to others. Therefore, students become systematic and punctual in classroom study.

I feel students should be organized. This is the key to success. A student can be organized if he studies in classroom settings. The reason is in classroom students have to manage their schedule with teacher and classmates. Sometimes teachers give extra classes in the morning so they want to all students should be in the class. So students come in the habit of organized themselves according to others. Once students learn this thing can be never fail in life.

[Kitosdad]

Many people live on earth. Everybody has his own view. It does not matter whether you take distance-learning courses or study in traditional classroom settings. Only results matter. Both ways of studies have their own advantages. These are as follows.

First I would explain the advantages of distance-learning courses.

In my perspective, a student who takes distance-learning courses can save their time and energy. Students do not (have to) go anywhere (to) study in distance-learning.
So they can use that time for study. (T)hey do not waste their energy in commut(ing). Therefore, they have more energy when they study. I also feel (that) in distance-learning students can s(e)t a schedule according to their convenience.
In distance-learning students can listen (to) the lectures many times, and (whenever) they want. In this way they can understand the (subject much better).

While on the other hand, students those prefer to study in traditional classroom settings with a teacher, also have many advantages.
In my view, (those) students (who) prefer to study in (a) classroom with a teacher can solve any problem on the spot.
Sometimes students may forget their problem if they do not have a teacher.
So the problem remains, and they do not (have) their confusions (clarified).
If students study in (a) classroom they become competent and friendly as well.

In classroom study many students and teachers are available, so students can discuss their future(s) with them, and (be made)aware(of) good things.
In classroom study students manage their schedule of study according to others. Therefore, students become systematic and punctual in classroom study(ing).

I feel students should be organized. This is the key to success. A student can be organized if he studies in classroom settings. The reason is, in (a) classroom students have to manage their schedule with teacher and classmates.
Sometimes teachers give extra classes in the morning, so they want (that) all students should be in the class.
So students (develop) the habit of organiz(ing) themselves according to others.
Once students learn this, (they will) never fail in life.
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[Gurramrashmi]

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