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#2 (permalink) Tue Jul 21, 2009 20:41 pm Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he...) |
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Good please complete it _________________ live quite life |
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#3 (permalink) Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:19 am Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he...) |
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So our "Jungle boy" has entered the college :) And now he's not climbing the trees. Good!! _________________ incomplete.... |
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#4 (permalink) Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:34 am Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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| Honey2 wrote: |
Good. Please complete it. |
Everything that has a beginning, has an end. But there seems no end when it comes to capitalizing letters or is there?
:) _________________ First lesson - English, not english. I, not i. ~A student of English |
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#5 (permalink) Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:37 am Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he...) |
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| Kiprida wrote: |
| So our "Jungle boy" has entered the college :) And now he's not climbing the trees. Good!! |
How could he be a Jungle boy!
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#6 (permalink) Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:40 am Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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| Gray wrote: |
| Honey2 wrote: |
Good. Please complete it. |
Everything that has a beginning, has an end. But there seems no end when it comes to capitalizing letters or is there?
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:twisted: But with your correction my mistakes , I think there is end .
:wink: Thank you Gray
You are very good guy. _________________ live quite life |
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#7 (permalink) Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:51 am Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he...) |
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"Those were happy days of his life. So happy that he never realized as they were passing by. Playing with friends for the whole weekend, climbing trees and eating fruits, swimming in the nearby river, trekking mountains, wandering through forests, enjoying the rain and many more things were a part of his dreamlike world."- this reminds me the book "Jungle boy" :)
Regards,
~Phoebe
P.S. You haven't named your "hero" yet ;) _________________ incomplete.... |
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#8 (permalink) Wed Jul 22, 2009 18:54 pm Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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| P.S. You haven't named your "hero" yet ;) |
'My' hero? Why do you think that he is an hero? And what he could do with a name?
The story is yet to end.
:) _________________ First lesson - English, not english. I, not i. ~A student of English |
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#9 (permalink) Wed Jul 22, 2009 19:04 pm Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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:twisted: But with you correcting my mistakes, I think there is an end .
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#10 (permalink) Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:51 am Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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| Gray wrote: |
| Kiprida wrote: |
| P.S. You haven't named your "hero" yet ;) |
'My' hero? Why do you think that he is an hero? And what he could do with a name?
The story is yet to end.
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Yes, he's a hero of the story :) Of YOUR STORY!!! If you had named him, I wouldn't have called him "hero" or "jungle boy" ;)
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#11 (permalink) Fri Jul 24, 2009 8:04 am Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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Good morning Gray. Excuse me my friend, but I am becoming confused with this story, as there appears to be two threads overlapping, or am I really confused? :) :)
Kitos. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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#12 (permalink) Fri Jul 24, 2009 13:05 pm Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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| Kitosdad wrote: |
Good morning Gray. Excuse me my friend, but I am becoming confused with this story, as there appears to be two threads overlapping, or am I really confused? :) :)
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I am confused too :?
What two threads are there? :) _________________ First lesson - English, not english. I, not i. ~A student of English |
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#13 (permalink) Fri Jul 24, 2009 13:39 pm Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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Sorry, I did mean to say two similar stories,yours and Phoebe's. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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#14 (permalink) Fri Jul 24, 2009 13:52 pm Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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| Kitosdad wrote: |
| Sorry, I did mean to say two similar stories,yours and Phoebe's. |
Perhaps you were referring this --
| Kiprida wrote: |
"Those were happy days of his life. So happy that he never realized as they were passing by. Playing with friends for the whole weekend, climbing trees and eating fruits, swimming in the nearby river, trekking mountains, wandering through forests, enjoying the rain and many more things were a part of his dreamlike world."- this reminds me the book "Jungle boy" :)
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She just wanted the main character to have a name :)
By the way, I now realize that though writing stories is difficult, it is interesting too... much more interesting than what I had thought before. _________________ First lesson - English, not english. I, not i. ~A student of English |
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#15 (permalink) Fri Jul 24, 2009 14:34 pm Unnamed 2 (His teachers, too, had a lot of faith in him. And as expected, he. |
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"much more interesting than what I had thought before"
And that is where the real beauty lies. You can make the story whatever way you wish. Happy, sad, true, lie, there s no end to it. You can even write the same story twice with different endings.
Entertain yourself and others, whilst improving both your English and your thinking.
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