Sentence: Mrs. Bloomshed's tirade on Jenny Chou seemed too harsh.

[Daniel430lee]

Could you please check to see if i used these words correctly?

Please, try to elaborate my sentence more or correct it.

Tirade:
Mrs.Bloomshed's tirade on Jenny Chou seemed too harsh. ( I think I'm missing things, could you please help me elaborate this sentence more?)

Ephemeral:
Commonly used words like the "Dud" is ephemeral.

Torpor:
Right now, I cannot seem to get out of this mental torpor that's preventing me from memorizing words.

[Kitosdad]

Try Google.
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