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If you could comeback some time and place in the past. When and where would... #1 (permalink) Wed Jul 29, 2009 18:03 pm   If you could comeback some time and place in the past. When and where would...
 

If you could comeback some time and place in the past. When and where would you go?

If I could turn back the time, I would want to comeback to the time when I was in secondary school in my hometown. That was one of the most beautiful time to me when I lived together with my grandparents. It also was very interesting when I gained a lot of necessary knowledge and living experience, the time I did not have many problem in mind and just enjoyed my life as it naturally is.

When I was in secondary school, I studied in a local school and my family lived in my hometown. I still remember all the happy time when we had meal or sticked together taking around tea table after dinner. My father usually talked to my grandfather about football, my grandmother told us ancient stories. Every time I think about it, it sounds like I still hear the sweet voice of my grandmother telling us beautiful story about the little people and White Snow. That was definitely the time I would pay any price to come back one more time

Being in secondary school is the time when I got a lot of living experience as well as interesting academic knowledge. At that age, everything seemed all so fresh to me. Every little detail about the surrounding thing all made me so curious. The more I known about it, the more I found it interesting. Every day was a small discovery with all amazing and new things. To me, life was a very wonderful tour which you could never get enough.

But I think the crucial reason made me want to comeback to my “secondary school” time is that I always felt so comfortable living my life during that time. Everything was so enjoyable and I did not have as many things to worry about as I do now. Today I have to worry about my job, deal with my boss about my salary. I have so many thing to carry then sometimes I get stressed, feeling like I have to take this life, not enjoy this life any more.

I believe that anyone has at least once in their lives wished they could bring yesterday back around. Some people want to be younger, some want to undo their mistakes. To me, I want to comeback to my happy time together with the people I love, the time that I gained the first experience and there was not many difficulties that I have to face every single day.
I have finished this within 50' :-) Please give me some comment on this. Thanks so much

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If you could comeback some time and place in the past. When and where would y #2 (permalink) Wed Jul 29, 2009 19:02 pm   If you could comeback some time and place in the past. When and where would y
 

Nice BS. A few errors, but they do not detract from a good essay.
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If you could comeback some time and place in the past. When and where would you g #3 (permalink) Thu Jul 30, 2009 9:06 am   If you could comeback some time and place in the past. When and where would you g
 

Thank so much, Kitos.
Thanks for always being ready to give me a motivation to write more :-)
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