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#2 (permalink) Fri Jul 31, 2009 19:18 pm Is my sentence grammatically correct? |
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"I remember reading a quote from a philosopher which said that she deduced time wouldn't exist at all if we hadn't seen any changes in the world."
That said, the last part is worded oddly. You might want to say "She deduced that, if we didn't see changes in the world, time wouldn't exist at all". |
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BrianL I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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#3 (permalink) Fri Jul 31, 2009 19:25 pm Is my sentence grammatically correct? |
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that is good :) _________________ live quite life |
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Honey2 I'm here quite often ;-)

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#4 (permalink) Fri Jul 31, 2009 20:09 pm Is my sentence grammatically correct? |
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Hey thanks Brian. So the correct sentence is like this?
"I remember reading a quote from a philosopher which said that she deduced that, if we didn't see changes in the world, time wouldn't exist at all.'' |
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Iloveenglish I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#5 (permalink) Fri Jul 31, 2009 21:12 pm Is my sentence grammatically correct? |
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On second thought, go ahead and use "I remember reading a quote from a philosopher that said she had deduced that, if we didn't see changes in the world, time wouldn't exist at all.''.
The difference between "that" and "which" is very subtle; but it's something some people are picky about. I should've been more through the first time around.
http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/which.html |
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BrianL I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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#6 (permalink) Fri Jul 31, 2009 22:57 pm Is my sentence grammatically correct? |
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| Ok, thanks dude. |
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Iloveenglish I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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