Parents are the best teachers

[Hema Bernard]

Dear Mr.Kitos,

Kindly edit - Thanks Hema

Yes, Parents are the best teachers.

We learn to talk, read, write & from our parents. Parents teach us to recite prayers, good manners, respect others and this helps us build up a good relationship with our relatives, neighbours, friends, classmates etc.

They are the one who show us the way to lead our lives. With the helps of our parents we learn to walk by holding there hand. They are the one who brought us into this world and thought us how to overcome our problems.

We learn to play, dance, jump, run from our parents. We feel secure when they are with us. If we hurt ourselves we will run to them crying for help and for any cause we need them beside us.

Parents are the one who understand our needs and fulfill it without any negligent. They are the one who give us the education. They struggle hard to educate us. They are the one with whom we share our feelings.

An example to say parents are the best teachers is follows.

Pinky and Rosy were very good friends, they were studying in the same class and same school. They were together always.

Pinky’s parents were well educated. They used teach her good manners and respect elders and they used teach her to help others when they are in need.

Rosy’s parents were also well educated, they were very good in their status and her parents used always feel they are well-to-do and successful business family. They were always pride of themselves. This made Rosy a bigheaded girl.

One day Rosy & Pinky had gone to Mr.& Mrs.Sam’s party along with their parents. In the party everybody were wishing each other and when the guests spoke to Rosy, she didn’t respond to them very well, but when guests spoke to Pinky, she responded very well to all and wished them back.

The guests who had come for the party didn’t like Rosy’s behaviour and were talking to each other about Rosy’s behaviour and were telling about her parents not teaching her good manners. At the same time they all praised Pinky for her good manners and her parents for teaching her good manners.

From this event it states that parents are the best teachers.

[Kitosdad]

Yes, Parents are the best teachers.

We learn to talk, read, and write from our parents. Parents teach us to recite prayers, good manners, respect for others and this helps us to build up a good relationship with our relatives, neighbours, friends, classmates etc.

They are the ones who show us the way to lead our lives. With the help of our parents we learn to walk by holding their hand. They are the ones who brought us into this world and taught us how to overcome our problems.

We learn to play, dance, jump, run from our parents. We feel secure when they are with us. If we hurt ourselves we will run to them crying for help, and for any cause we need them beside us.

Parents are the one who understand our needs and fulfil it without any negligence.
They are the one who give us our education. They struggle hard to educate us. They are the ones with whom we share our feelings.

An example to say parents are the best teachers is follows.

Pinky and Rosy were very good friends. They were studying in the same class and at the same school. They were always together.

Pinky’s parents were well educated. They used to teach her good manners and to respect elders, and they used to teach her to help others when they were in need.

Rosy’s parents were also well educated. They were very good in their own opinion of themselves, and her parents used always feel they were a well-to-do and successful business family. They were always proud of themselves. This made Rosy a big-headed girl.

One day Rosy & Pinky had gone to Mr.& Mrs.Sam’s party along with their parents.
At the party everybody were wishing each other well, and when the guests spoke to Rosy, she didn’t respond to them very well, but when guests spoke to Pinky, she responded very well to all and wished them back.

The guests who had come for the party didn’t like Rosy’s behaviour and were talking to each other about Rosy’s attitude, and were talking about her parents not teaching her good manners.
At the same time they all praised Pinky for her good manners, and her parents for raising her so very well..

From this example it shows that parents are the best teachers.

Well written Hema. Please check out the corrections for yourself. Kitos.
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[Hema Bernard]

Good Morning Mr.Kitos

OK, I'll get back to u with the corrections.

Thanks
Hema

[Hema Bernard]

Dear Mr. Kitos,

It was really helpful, correcting my own mistakes.

Thanks a ton - Hema

Yes, Parents are the best teachers.

We learn to talk, read, (and) write from our parents. Parents teach us to recite prayers, good manners, respect (for) others and this helps us (to) build up a good relationship with our relatives, neighbours, friends, classmates etc.

They are the one(s) who show us the way to lead our lives. With the help of our parents we learn to walk by holding the(ir) hand. They are the one(s) who brought us into this world and thought us how to overcome our problems.

We learn to play, dance, jump, run from our parents. We feel secure when they are with us. If we hurt ourselves we will run to them crying for help(,) and for any cause we need them beside us.

Parents are the one who understand our needs and fulfil it without any negligen(ce).

They are the one who give us (our) education. They struggle hard to educate us. They are the one(s) with whom we share our feelings.

An example to say parents are the best teachers is follows.

Pinky and Rosy were very good friends(.) (T)hey were studying in the same class and (at the) same school. They were always together.

Pinky’s parents were well educated. They used (to) teach her good manners and (to) respect elders, and they used (to) teach her to help others when they (were) in need.

Rosy’s parents were also well educated(.) (T)hey were very good in their (own opinion of themselves) and her parents used to always feel they (were a) well-to-do and successful business family. They were always (proud) of themselves. This made Rosy a big(-)headed girl.

One day Rosy & Pinky had gone to Mr.& Mrs.Sam’s party along with their parents.

(At) the party everybody were wishing each other (well,) and when the guests spoke to Rosy, she didn’t respond to them very well, but when guests spoke to Pinky, she responded very well to all and wished them back.

The guests who had come for the party didn’t like Rosy’s behaviour and were talking to each other about Rosy’s (attitude,) and were (talking) about her parents not teaching her good manners.

At the same time they all praised Pinky for her good manners and her parents for (raising) her (so very well).

From this (example) it (shows) that parents are the best teachers.

[Kitosdad]

Well done Hema. Proud of you.

Kitos.
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[Hema Bernard]

Thanks a Ton -Mr.Kitos

[Kitosdad]

My favourite nationalities are Indian and Chinese, because they always appear to be so determined to succeed in whatever they attempt.

Kitos.
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[Silky]

Parents are the best teachers.

Again this is one of my first essays. Any advice is greatly appreciated.
please also give me some comments as per TOEFL standard.

This is very true that parents plays very significant and close role in child life. Parents are uttermost person for child in their life and child is everything for them. So there is no doubt that parents are the best teacher.

Child Parents bond is such a stronger bond that it affects child in either way. Parents are such a devoted and loving person in the whole world that no one can do comparison to them. From the starting point of their child birth they always tries to provide support and comfort. they works as a good guide for their child.

They teach us how to walk, eat, talk etc. they teach us what is wrong and right and how to take decision in tough time. In every aspect they are the only one who nurtures different qualities in their child life. They assist child to learn trust, patience, responsibility, empathy and self reliance. Parents are the one who gives own moral value examples to their child.

In conclusion there is no doubt that others also can play teacher role in any child life but parents are very close to their child so they can play it very efficiently and easily with precious outcome.

[Hema Bernard]

Thanks,

Hema

[Silky]

I don't know why my essay haven't noticed in forum?
is that because of thoughts of boredom in my essay?
Any advice is greatly appreciated.
please also give me some comments as per TOEFL standard.

[Kitosdad]

Silky, please post your essay under a New Topic posting. That way it will not get missed.

Kitos.
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[Silky]

Thanks Mr.Kitos

I did the same but somehow it went under existing posting.even i was searching for my essay today.
I will make sure next time.

[Aanca]

Hi everyone! I am a new member, I have my exam in a month and I really need your opinion about my essay!

Parents are the best teachers

When a child misbehave in my home county, the people say that he doesn’t have the first seven years of education and this is mainly the time the child spends at home before school. So, it is my belief that parent are the most important teachers that we could have.

In the first place, our parents are the first teachers that we have. They teach us how to speak, to walk, to eat, to dress, which are important tasks in someone’s life. I remember now the case of a twelve years old girl found in the Indian jungle. This is not the imaginary case presented in the Jungle Book, it is a real one but very similar to it. The girl behaved like a wild animal, she didn’t have any human behavior. The investigators thought that she was raised by wolfs. This is an extreme situation, but you can imply how important is our first contact in life, how important are parents.

In the second place, we learn from them the attitude regarding life in general. To me attitude is more important than facts. It is more important than past, than education, than money, than failures and successes, than other people think, or say or do. And the most remarkable thing is that the attitude is something that we can choose every day and our parents are the ones who can teach us how easy is to be happy, how to react to different important situations in life or how to interact with other people.

To summarize, parents are not our only teachers but they are the most important ones. With them we have our first contact in life, we learn from them the most important tasks and they prepare us for life in general.