 #1 (permalink) Tue Aug 04, 2009 18:31 pm TOEFL topic: Why do you think people attend university? |
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This is my first time to write the toefl essay,and im going to have a toefl test this 9.26...that please have a look at my essay...and help to correct my mistakes and give me some suggestions...thanks..
1， why do u think people attend university ?
When it comes a question that why so many people attend universities or colleges, there are such prevail reasons like getting a better job after graduated, getting more knowledge to improve ourselves, etc. Universities or colleges is a place where people pusure a bachelor degree which may be a key to be offered a job.
With the development of science and internet, the world are in a high-speed opearation. Everyone are afraid to take a slight change to slow down the pace a little bit. So we are busily egaged in studying. We are obliged to go through a battle to enter the top universities. In the universities, we learn an abundant of knowledge. We can discuss what we interest with our professors and our classmates. We can choose the courses freely. We employ the knowledge to internships. Also living on the campus means that living in a small society. Universities is a bridge to the real world. You will meet a lot of different people from other areas. Campus is not only a place for study, but it also a place for culture exchange.There you will experience other cultrue and people’s friendly. Not only do we broaden our eyes, but also we expand our social circles. Then we get more experience which may be a paramount key to our future.
However, some people attend universities just for fun. They just stay awake through the class and even don’t know what the courses they take. All they want to just a bachelor degree. In their opinion, once they get the degree, it assumes that they will surely get a job.
As far as I am concerned, college life is a crucial part of our life before we enter the society. When I was a child, it is my dream and my parents’ expectations to go to college. Just like most of people, it is a way to absorb the basic sklls and experience which exerts pivotal influences on your whole life and a unforgettable memory.
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