Name a part of your life that you would like to relive.

[Silky]

Name a part of your life that you would like to relive.

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This is really a very touching topic. Life is full of surprise, fun, sorrow and different stages. No body knows what will happen next but everybody knows what was in past. What we have gained or lost. May be someone never lost something, will be luck enough but who lost they have only memories.

In this easy I want to return in my childhood with my mom, dad, sister, grandfather, grandmother and my little sister. That stage of my life when every one was with me. That time we used to play, studies, and eats. We used to go to park, shopping center with mom and dad. Life was like marry ground with family and friends with lots of fun and only fun.

Really who does not want back in childhood? Golden time of life, passed without worry. My grandfather such a great and kind person, who always care for me, my grandmother very loving and kind hearted lady always loves me lot, my father who used to tell me right thing, my mom who always guide me in difficult time .All of them whom I left behind, I wants to be live with them in my dream. I want to relive that sweet life from which I learned, gained and achieved lot in my present and will keep that always.

A piece of writing on this wonderful thought is never finished. Looking ahead this day dreaming is never ending as Childhood is such a beautiful stage with full of bliss and joy.

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[Kitosdad]

This is really a very touching topic. Life is full of surprise(s), fun, sorrow and different stages.
(Nobody) knows what will happen next but everybody knows what was in (the) past. What we have gained or lost. (Maybe) someone never lost something, (that) will be luck enough, but (for those) who (have)lost, they have only memories.

In this (essay) I want to return (to) my childhood with my mom, dad, sister, grandfather, grandmother and my little sister.

That stage of my life when (everyone) was with me. That time (when)we used to play, (study), and (eat). We used to go to (the) park, (to the) shopping center with mom and dad. Life was like (a merry-go-round) with family and friends (and) lots of fun and only fun.

Really who does not want (to go) back (to their) childhood?

Golden time(s) of life, passed without worry.

My grandfather, such a great and kind person, who always care(d) for me. (M)y grandmother, (a) very loving and kind hearted lady, (who) always love(d) me lot.

(M)y father, who used to tell me right thing(s). (M)y mom who always guide(d) me in difficult time(s).

All of them whom I left behind, I want to live with them in my dream. I want to relive that sweet life from which I learned, gained and achieved lot in my present and will keep that always.

A piece of writing (of these) wonderful thought(s) is never finished.

Looking ahead this day dreaming is never ending as (c)hildhood is such a beautiful stage, full of bliss and joy.

Very nice Silky, very nice. Only a few simple mistakes.

Kitos.
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[Silky]

Thanks a lot Mr. Kitos

I will keep trying.