TOEFL® essay: When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing...

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Do you think luck or work hard plays the crucial role in one’s success? I think it would be hard work. You will find a better resource for your work if you spend more time on collecting it. Being hard working also will help you make a good preparation for your work. And luck will become disable if it is in the hand of a people who do not know how to use it.

You have to have necessary knowledge as well as required resource to built the first stair in your way reaching success. The more time you spend on finding resource, the more substantial your way would be. And the harder you work to consolidate your self, the shorter your way would be.

Spending more time and effort on your work definitely will make it become better. When you spend more time on doing something, at first that could be hard, but later as you get familiar with that kind of work and have experience on solving that kind of problem, you will do it faster and better.

Luck will lose its magic if somebody do not have enough knowledge to use it in the right place. Let’s imagine if somebody get the chance to be a manager of a company, but he do not have ability of management, totally he will ruin that chance and lead that company to failure. Or somebody suddenly have a lot of money but do not know what to do with it, how to invest it, money will become something invalid in his hand. Luck in these cases becomes useless.

Let’s work hard to accompany your self with a wide knowledge and make a good preparation for any work you plan to do, you will succeed. A little luck will help you sometimes but do not count on it. You just catch it when you make yourself ready for a chase of luck

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