TOEFL® essay: online learing is a good option for student. Agree or disagree?

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With the development of technology, they tend to make the new way for study that is online learning. Online learning step by step establishes in education system in the word and spread to Vietnam. In contrast, for me that is not the good way for students to make study. Beside some advantages that may brings, but i never support that new teaching method. It restraints the relationship between other students and gives some discussion hardship.
Student go to school not only get knowledge, they also learn how to make relationship with his friends, teacher and others in school. They need to improve communicate skill. Online learning may reduce some ability from student. IN real life, they can not stay only in chair in front of computer to communicate with others, and some how they can't talk to amount of people in the same time when they get online. Study through computer may limit skill talking to amount of people. However, While getting online learning, students only see teacher so that they can not make friend with others or event thought they can't discuss with them. Study with out discussion is really not good way for them.
Study online brings advantage about distance, but it may be a difficult for students to make discussion. May be professor will introduce you some friend in the same course to discuss, and you use email to contact them, but in case the electric is out or your network has some problem, how could you contact them? In the other hand, when you are make some product, ou may get information from your partner, but you must only finish that alone. If that is really big and difficult, it will be really a serious problem for your graduation
After all, i thought it's not effective method with passive limited. With some that restraint, student may need consider that new process to get active learning

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