Hello from one of your new Bulgarian members.

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Hello from Dimitar(That is me I registered before seconds. I find this tests and that forum very important for peopel who are trying to improve their English like me but I don't even know if I write it correctly. I just want someone to help me by checking some of my Dialogues and Essays if someone want to help me I will be very grateful.
P.S. I'm making an exam next week and I want someone who have the time to help me with my bad English.

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Please My Exam is next week and I want someone to explaine my the mistakes in that dialogue.

-A:Hey what is wrong with you today?What hapened?
-B:My girlfriend has just broke up with me.We have been together for four years.
-A:You don't have to worry about it.But if you realy love her you will have to talk with her again.
-B:I realy love her but I think if love her then I must let her go.
-A:What is the reason for that?
-B:I realy don't know but she told me that I wasn't ready to live with her.
-Ao you know what I think?I think she is trying to lie you.
-B:Why are you think like that?
-A:Because I saw her yesterday with one man.They were eating in one restourant.
-B:Is that so this time I'm going to talk with her tomorow and ask her about that you just told me.
-A:Sorry about that but you are my best friend and you deserve to know the truth.

[GraceFu]

A hey (with someones name), how have you been? "i dont think what is wrong with you is prefect. you can try this one."
B my gf has just broken up with me. "it is broken! not broke." we have been tgt for 4 years.
A you dont need to worry about it. i think you need to talk her if you love her.
B i do love her! but i think i need to let her go. (i think there is sth weird. we need to find someone native speaker. )
A why?
B she told me i wasnt ready to be together.
A i dont think so. i think she lies to you.
B why? there is not reason she lies to me.
A i saw her yesterday. she was with a man in a restaurant.
B (actually, i dont understand what you try to say.)
A i am sorry. you are my best friend. you need to know the truth.

ok. here is it. we need to find a native speaker to help us. =))

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Thank you very much GraceFu

[GraceFu]

you are welcome =))
all the best in your exam! =))

[Teacher Josue]

Hello from Mexico...

If I can help you don't worry...

Josué

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I have just seen you post and it will be great if you can check somo of my Dialogues and Essys 200-300wrd I hope I'm not tоо bolt :)My exam is after 2 days

-A:Hi B how are you?
-B:Hi A I'm fine.I have just heard that you are planning to go to a foreing country? Are you going to work there?
-A:Yes I'm going to work as a barman on the beach for the next five months.
-Bo you want some good advice because last year I was working as a barman too.
-A:Ok I'm all ears.
-B:Firs I had to rung to the manager and then to lerned how to make some cocktails.If you need any recipes I could borrow you this book.
-A:No I don't need any books.However, I want you to advice me about the money how much it cost the ticket to the beach!?
-B:I realy don't know because I have flat there and I used to live there when I was working.
-A:Ok then can tell me about your experience with the people there?How I must dress?Do I have to listen all the people there?
-B:You can dress casual if you want but is a nice to talk with all the peoples at the bar.

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hello any one there please

[Teacher Josue]