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#1 (permalink) Thu Aug 13, 2009 2:20 am What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? |
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
“There is no other place like home” is a very true adage for me. My apartment is not a very big place, but is enough for me and my family and the most important thing, it is homey. Every room has its own charm and beauty and I like them all, but the most important for me is the living room because of the wonderful time I spend in it.
In the first place, my living room is very spacious and I have arranged a little “play ground” for my daughter. Now she is sixteen mounts old and I remember every stage in her life as a correlation with a specific toy she had. When she was an infant she slept in her swing during the day; as she grew-up she passed to an activity gym, later to a jumper and now she walks and runs and I have so much fun and pleasure watching her.
In the second place, one of my favorite things to do is to sit and talk with my husband. Before bedtime, I enjoy sitting on the sofa with a cup of tea on the table from which I will seep slowly and I will talk to my husband about how the day was, about further plans; it gives me a feeling of connection and caring.
In the third place, in the living room I have wonderful time watching good movies with my husband, especially comedies. We just sit in front of the TV in our comfortable armchairs with a bag full of popcorn in our arms, laughing and later talking about the movie.
To summarize, my house is special because it is my home and the most pleasure time I spend in it is in the living room. This time is special because it is spent with my family, the persons that I love most, my daughter and my husband. |
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Aanca I'm new here and I like it ;-)

Joined: 11 Aug 2009 Posts: 17 Location: Romania
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#2 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 19:09 pm What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? |
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Please tell me what do you think about my essay? What do I have to improve? Any suggestion is more than welcome. Thanks |
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Aanca I'm new here and I like it ;-)

Joined: 11 Aug 2009 Posts: 17 Location: Romania
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#3 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 19:56 pm What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? |
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Anaca, I loved your essay. You need very little guidance to improvement. Just keep on reading and writing. It is all going very well for you. _________________ If you need me, I'm here. |
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Kitosdad I'm a Communicator ;-)

Joined: 04 Mar 2009 Posts: 3939 Location: ESSEN, Germany, (but English.)
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#4 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:04 pm What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? |
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Aanca, is there one more bedroom in your house? lol I got more interested in you home when you talked about your mini-cinema, with popcorns.
Of course, our house makes parts of our life. That's because is there where the most important and significant things are. Your essay is very interested and I understood clearly. Continue writing essays like this, it'll be a pleasure to read.  _________________ I am the product of my education and experience. |
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Tomasito I'm here quite often ;-)

Joined: 23 Jun 2009 Posts: 173 Location: Mozambique
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#5 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:20 pm What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? |
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Thank you Kitos, I will do so, my exam is in a month and I do not have to much time to prepare. I only hope to do my best. Thank you again! |
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Aanca I'm new here and I like it ;-)

Joined: 11 Aug 2009 Posts: 17 Location: Romania
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#6 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:23 pm What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? |
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| Thank you Tomasito for your reply. |
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Aanca I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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Kitosdad I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#8 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:49 pm What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? |
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Thank you for your encouragement! My daughter is in the picture, is my favorite one. Aanca |
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Aanca I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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Pizza I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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