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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?



 
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #1 (permalink) Thu Aug 13, 2009 2:20 am   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?

“There is no other place like home” is a very true adage for me. My apartment is not a very big place, but is enough for me and my family and the most important thing, it is homey. Every room has its own charm and beauty and I like them all, but the most important for me is the living room because of the wonderful time I spend in it.

In the first place, my living room is very spacious and I have arranged a little “play ground” for my daughter. Now she is sixteen mounts old and I remember every stage in her life as a correlation with a specific toy she had. When she was an infant she slept in her swing during the day; as she grew-up she passed to an activity gym, later to a jumper and now she walks and runs and I have so much fun and pleasure watching her.

In the second place, one of my favorite things to do is to sit and talk with my husband. Before bedtime, I enjoy sitting on the sofa with a cup of tea on the table from which I will seep slowly and I will talk to my husband about how the day was, about further plans; it gives me a feeling of connection and caring.

In the third place, in the living room I have wonderful time watching good movies with my husband, especially comedies. We just sit in front of the TV in our comfortable armchairs with a bag full of popcorn in our arms, laughing and later talking about the movie.

To summarize, my house is special because it is my home and the most pleasure time I spend in it is in the living room. This time is special because it is spent with my family, the persons that I love most, my daughter and my husband.
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #2 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 19:09 pm   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

Please tell me what do you think about my essay? What do I have to improve?
Any suggestion is more than welcome.
Thanks
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #3 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 19:56 pm   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

Anaca, I loved your essay. You need very little guidance to improvement. Just keep on reading and writing.
It is all going very well for you.
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #4 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:04 pm   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

Aanca, is there one more bedroom in your house? lol I got more interested in you home when you talked about your mini-cinema, with popcorns.

Of course, our house makes parts of our life. That's because is there where the most important and significant things are. Your essay is very interested and I understood clearly. Continue writing essays like this, it'll be a pleasure to read. Wink
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #5 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:20 pm   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

Thank you Kitos, I will do so, my exam is in a month and I do not have to much time to prepare. I only hope to do my best.
Thank you again!
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #6 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:23 pm   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

Thank you Tomasito for your reply.
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #7 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:42 pm   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

Never fear Aanca, with essays like this one you will sail through.

Kitos.

ps. Love the picture too. Smile Smile
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #8 (permalink) Mon Aug 17, 2009 20:49 pm   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

Thank you for your encouragement!
My daughter is in the picture, is my favorite one.
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What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? #9 (permalink) Wed Sep 02, 2009 0:16 am   What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?
 

I think you have easier topic to write about than me .

I think you are very lucky. Laughing

I took my toefl in this august our topic is about clean environment . Sad Rolling Eyes
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