A person should never make an important decision alone.

[Silky]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone.

Every single decision is very important in life. Decision can be small or big. It can make a life or break a life. It is also matters, in which situation are you going to take decision.

Like if doctor need to take decision on the operation table and patient condition is critical. What will happen if he is unable to make decision? That delicate matter of second, patient can lost their life. But He should well balanced and careful as one wrong decision can change everything.

On another situation husband should not take any important decision alone as it is matter of family. Husband and wife both are equal responsible for any decision. So even in any case he needs to take decision alone. He should be must concern about wife's decision.

Above both examples gives us same conclusion. Life is chain of unexpected events. In that case my opinion would be person should be strong enough to make decision alone.

If he/she will make decision alone, they will be only responsible for result. They don’t need to worry. Others will not blame him/her for that wrong decision.

What is the probability of right decision, even if it has been taken by group of people? In that case people can try to accuse each other. Like in workplace if decision need to be taken by team members. If that decision is not right, team will not get success. If so many people are required to take single decision for any project. Due to this delay in project is possible.

However it is not possible to take decision alone sometimes. I consider taking decision alone if it is related to my own life. Only thing people have to keep in mind is that they must know themselves very well for not to make a bad decision based on other´s thoughts and interest.

[Silky]

please evaluate my essay.

[Blackswallow]

Dear Silky !

In your essay, you did not make so many grammatical mistakes and you did use a variety of vocabulary. Just only one problem that I think you should try to make your essay a little clearer.

Let's imagine that you are the reader, you will expect that the writer will give you an overview of what he plan to talk about in the next paragraphs in the beginning of the essay. When I read yours, I can not find out what is your opinion. It sounds that you think it depends on the situation that decision maker is in but it was not stated very clear so I am not sure about this.

And so on with the other paragraph. Each paragraph should present a separate idea. It should contain a statement sentence and argument or detail supporting for the idea.

Just my point of view as a reader . Good luck my friend !

[Silky]

Thanks Blackswallow. I will keep in mind next time.ya you are right .this one is not well organize and fuzzy.

[Kitosdad]

Hello Silky and Blackswallow.

Nevertheless, for two non-native speakers I feel that the essay and comments made about it are jaw-dropping.

You both deserve a round of applause.

I only wish my German, (after nine years) was half as good as your command of English.

Well done to both of you.

Kitos.
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[Silky]

Thanks Mr.Kitos
Thank you which you encourage us to do as always. I really do appreciate everything you have done for us all.

[Donisha]

Dear Silky,

Your essay is very impressing.

Is English used as a language for communication in your country and also is spoken by every indian individuality?

[Silky]

Thanks Donisha,

In India, English is primarily a second language.As I think only about ten percent of India's population speak English, but they are the individuals who lead India's economic, industrial, professional, political, and social life.

[Donisha]

I thought that English is considered as official language as the indian language is.

And I know a lot of Englishlearners from my country who visited your country to improve their English skills.

According to Business Spotlight there is even a special English in your homecountry that differs from the American or British English. Is it correct?