Sentence: You can leave your application...

[Rosario]

Hello everybody,

Please correct my English speaking that I have done to foreign people who came to the embassy last week. I hope I will practice the best for next time with your help.

There is a visitor who came to the embassy to submit application for visa and pay for visa, however my friend who responsible for visa nothing in the office. So, he asked if I could help him.

Then I told him like this sentence below:

Well, you can leave your application here with me, however the payment for visa must direct to Ms.Dona.

Is that correct answer?

Thanks in advance.

[Mister Micawber]

I'm sure that the visitor understood you. However:

Well, you can leave your application here with me. However, the fee for your visa must be paid directly to Ms.Dona.
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[Rosario]

Thank you very much Mr.Micawber.

[Muhammad201]

Short Leave application:-
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to request for leave, actually my stomach is not working well and I am feeling unwell. I can't continue work the rest of day any futher. kinldy grant me short leave.

I will oblige in this regard.

............
************Sir check above application and reply me**********

[Beeesneees]

Dear Sir,
I am writing to request for sick leave, actually as my I have an upset stomach is not working well and I am feeling generally unwell. I can't continue with work for the rest of the day so would appreciate it if you were to kindly grant me a short leave.

I hope you will oblige in this regard.
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Cheers m' dears!

[E2e4]

Dear coach Beeesneees,

would it be all right to say it this way below?

I am writing to you so as to request for sick leave as I have got an upset stomach and..

Thanks

[Beeesneees]

I am writing to request sick leave as I have (got) an upset stomach and...

'for sick leave' is wrong here. 'Got' is unnecessary.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Sureshvemuri]

[Beeesneees]

Yes, in formal, grammatically correct usage, a new sentence would start with 'however' (a connective) rather than 'but' (a conjunction).

Connectives are words or phrases that link clauses or sentences.
Conjunctions are used to link words or clauses within a sentence.
All conjunctions are also connectives, but not all connectives are conjunctions.
You can find out more here:
http://www.northwood.org.uk/connectives%20conjunctions.html



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Cheers m' dears!

[Sureshvemuri]

thanks Beeesneees, for your help.

Suresh

[E2e4]

Why do you say "connective" instead of "connector".
Isn't connective an adjective, is it?

Thanks

[Mister Micawber]

'Connective' is adjective and noun:

Grammar . a word used to connect words, phrases, clauses, and sentences, as a conjunction.
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[Muhammad201]

i want to make a reminder letter to our opration people who had not submit their documents yet. its reminder come warming letter. please helps

[Beeesneees]

If you post your attempt, we'll see if we can help improve it.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Muhammad201]

Dear Sir,

This is inform that my computer is not working properly, due to this office work is being hampered. Moreover, one device (RAM) may please be upgraded. Therefore, the IT department may please be asked to look into the matter and fix the problem.

Specification:-
Microsoft Win XP version 2002 SP2
computer Intel (R)
Pentium -4
CPU 3.20 GHz, 3.19 GHz,
RAM 512 MB

I hereby seek your kind approval of my said request.

Thanks
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please reply that the my application is correct or not???