Some people are always in hurry to go places and get things done.

[Silky]

Some people are always in hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take time and live life in slow pace.

Different Kind’s of men’s in the world. Getting things done in fast speed or slow pace depends on so many reasons. Whatever you want to do should be done in correct way and on time. Once the time has been ended, you can’t go back in past to do things. So doing things in hurry or slow way both has its own advantages and disadvantages.

I would prefer to do things in slow pace rather then in hurry. Doing things in slow pace but in time bounded way will be always right .As in hurry you don’t have enough time to recheck anything. This can tends to you in wrong result.

An instance shows that working in hurry my uncle has got nothing. My uncle is an architect. Once he was working on critical project. Due to less time he need to work hard and a lot to do. He started work in hurry. He forgot to mention some of the most important stuffs in their project. What you think the worst possible thing could happen to him. He lost that project. So never work in hurry. The hurry theory is only a panic reaction and is never the solution.

Working in Hurry creates a higher level stress. Higher stress level disrupts the immune system in body. There will be less hurry, will be create less worry. This strategy will be much effective living the life you long and healthy.

If we are always in rush, we will miss all the happy moment of our life. You will never know when your child becomes a big boy. I think that people should enjoy their lives every minute. In your life some time should be for friends, family and children. You will feel it means to be more then anything. I believe that walking on the beach, our children laugh and nature's beauty are the most valuable things in the world. You only live this life once so taking things even slower will result enormous memory. If we are always in a hurry, we can miss the most amazing moments of our lives.

On the other hand proceeding at a desired rate you have more time to do. We can do anything in appropriate way, carefully with fewer mistakes. In childhood I listened to my grandmother, the fable of about tortoise and hare. I found the moral of the fable is, "Slow and steady wins the race."

[Silky]

Can one of you please evaluate my essay and give me a grade in 0-6 scale.

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Silky. Your essay, whilst having lots of correctly spelt words is lacking in the understanding of how and when they are used.
I can understand what you are trying to say, but that would not be acceptable as a submitted essay. The examiners are not there to try and understand what you mean. They read what is written there and mark your work accordingly.

I would suggest that you try to write less and read more. You MUST get the sentence structure correctly formed. You are trying really hard, I know this for a fact, but you must slow down and get it right.
As your essay says, more haste........ less speed.

Kitos.
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