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 #2 (permalink) Tue Aug 25, 2009 19:53 pm A job that can travel or a job that can return to homes every evening |
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u are right. most people like the job wich ending on the evening.
best regards.
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| #3 (permalink) Fri Mar 05, 2010 15:00 pm A job that can travel or a job that can return to homes every evening |
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Hello Blackswallow,
I think that I can take both of them. In my current state, which I'm not married yet, I would like to travel and work in other places. So, I can visit other people and cities which are interesting for me. Of course if there are not just in a single city. After getting married, I definitely want to come back to my home at night, and rest in front of my wife, and enjoy rest of the day with her.
- Salivan.
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| #4 (permalink) Fri Mar 05, 2010 16:14 pm A job that can travel or a job that can return to homes every evening |
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Hello everybody.
The latter is my choice,because I get married and have a lovely daughter.
The most happiness for me is that enjoying dinner with my family member.
I hope I have more time to take care my daughter,who is nearly two years old.
As you know, Job is not difficult for me compared to my family.
The above is my opinion about the topic,
If any mistakes,Please correct what I said.
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| #5 (permalink) Fri Mar 05, 2010 16:47 pm A job that can travel or a job that can return to homes every evening |
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The latter is my choice,because I AM married and have a lovely daughter.
The happIEST PART OF THE DAY for me is that WHILST enjoying dinner with my family memberS.
I hope I have more time to take care OF my daughter,who is nearly two years old.
As you know, MY JOB is not SO IMPORTANT TO me compared to my family.
The above is my opinion about the topic,
If THERE ARE any mistakes,Please correct what I HAVE said.
Thanks.[/quote]
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| #6 (permalink) Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:50 am A job that can travel or a job that can return to homes every evening |
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Hi,
Kitosdad, what do you think about my idea about this forum topic? Would you mind to give me some other key points? Do I have any grammar error in my previous post? If so, would you mind to correct them?
Thank you.
-Salivan |
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| #7 (permalink) Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:28 am A job that can travel or a job that can return to homes every evening |
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Hi,
Kitosdad, what do you think about my idea about this forum topic? Would you mind to give me some other key points? Do I have any grammar error in my previous post? If so, would you mind to correct them?
Thank you.
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