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My best friend named Alfred Guanzon. He has a well combed short black hair. He has an oval face shape and Sideburns on his face. To the left side of his ear, he also has a tiny mole that sometimes makes people presume that it’s an earring hole. He does have an average height of 5’7 feet or 67 inches. Alfred has a slim body shape with no tattoos and a tan complexion. Before I met him, he was a tremendous guy but now he is just about my size and certainly has a weight of 57 kilogram or 127.7 pounds (lbs) and has proven that he had been doing hard exercises to lose weight. He’s a left-handed person. He used to wear white polo shirts and shiny black leather shoes on school days.

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Please correct the grammar and composition. I know I have lots of mistakes.

Correction needed as soon as possible. Thank you.