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#1 (permalink) Thu Sep 03, 2009 8:42 am Sam's sorrow. |
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He looked at himself in the wardrobe mirror. His eyes were filled with sadness. He was sad that she was leaving, yet he knew not why. He'd always been faithful, only ever loving her, surely no-one could love her more than he, yet she was leaving. There was nothing that he could do to change her mind.
She had called for a taxi to take her to the station. He stood in the bedroom doorway and heard her thank the taxi-operator. Five minutes. Five minutes and she would be gone, and he would have to accept that.
If only he could think of one action that would make her change her mind. Any action that would make her take him into her arms and allow him to kiss her wonderful face once again, but he knew his pleas would now fall on deaf-ears. She was going and that was that!
She stood in the open doorway looking up the street for the taxi. He came slowly, ever so slowly, down the stairs. He moved quietly for he didn't wish for her to notice him. His eyes were filled with tears. He loved her so very much. He would willingly give his very life for her, yet she was leaving
He heard the sound of the approaching taxi, and watched in silence as she shrugged into her coat.
He rushed down the last of the stairs in the forlorn hope that she just might change her mind and stay.
At the sound of his presence she turned and looked at him. Her eyes were still filled with love for him. She smiled her wondeful smile and ran her fingers through his hair. With that she closed the door and entered the waiting taxi. It roared off into the distance.
He walked into the sitting room and sat on the sofa. He closed his eyes and slowly he fell into a deep sleep.
He was awakened by the sound of the key turning in the front-door lock. He walked into the hall. She stood there smiling at him.
"Hello Sam my darling." She knelt and wrapped her arms around him.
He wagged his tail happily. Mammy was home again.
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#2 (permalink) Thu Sep 03, 2009 9:53 am Sam's sorrow. |
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Lool ...Mammy
"He was sad that she was leaving, yet he knew not why. "- Kitos, can you explain 'knew not' ? I understand, it means he didn't know. But when can it be used in 'knew not' form? Is it informal speech?
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#3 (permalink) Thu Sep 03, 2009 11:47 am Sam's sorrow. |
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Dear Phoebe, I cannot explain.
I just write the words as they come into my head.
I know they are right at that point.
Just allow the words to flow. The words will take care of themselves.
I'm not a real writer or author in any regard. I simply amuse myself, and hopefully some others like your good self.
Kitos. _________________ If you need me, I'm here. |
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#4 (permalink) Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:13 pm Sam's sorrow. |
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wow, Kitosdad,
once again a very impressive understanding of little humanīs friendīs soul. Or are there any prompters whispering that words into your ears while you are writing down these doggish stories facing the screen?
However, finally the reader come to feel the actorīs emotions and fortunately this time the story ended pretty happily........... Puuuuuuh . I remember the hunter story
oooops...........was it me who wrote this post or was our little Dalamatiner having this reply written down by me?
Anyway, Regards............................. or even Woof?
Michael
Btw, in case you disliked this post, it wasnīt me but our little Dal........ |
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#5 (permalink) Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:18 pm Sam's sorrow. |
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Thanks Michael, I am happy just to find someone who takes the time to post a comment.
Sometimes I do think that animals have a command of telepathy. Wish I did. _________________ If you need me, I'm here. |
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Kitosdad I'm a Communicator ;-)

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Fan Of Arabian Horses I'm a Communicator ;-)

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