TOEFL® essay: large factory near your community...

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

In my country, Paraguay, there is a big need of jobs, because there is some troubles with the economy. Basin on this problem, We are not in the position to choose where is the best place to build a factory.
In the next paragraphs I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages have a factory near my community.

First of all, its true of the ecological problems that a large factory can generate. Depending of the kind of factory can be a real danger for the people, for example, a nuclear plant, or on the other side, can be a “good factory” like a recycle plant.

On boot cases, more new job opportunities will be for the community. Sadly in my country, that is a big problem. Almost fifty percent of the populations don't have a job, or have an unofficial job.
As a consequence, there are other problems like the insecurity and the crime.

There are many boys and girls, that after finish the school, they cannot find a job, finding and researching on every day without a good result.
In conclusion, I think the it would be nice to get a large factory near my community, just in the case that the factory respect the nature.

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