Boys and girls should attend separate schools

[Aanca]

Thank you all, it is a very good way to shape up myself. I agree with almost all of your comments, but I have also some questions for Richard.

1 the main purpose of education is to prepare an individual(OUR INDIVIDUALITY, individual is an adjective) for the life;
here I have used INDIVIDUAL as a noun not as an adjective;

2 relationship with the opposite sex is not very well established(UNDERSTANDABLE)
I think that If I do not use ESTABLISHED, I would rather use UNDERSTOOD than UNDERSTANDABLE

3 (HOWEVER,)others would say that boys excel under stress and girls adapt more easily to a new language, BUT I think that this is not a good reason to make this segregation.

I din not use HOWEVER in that position because a BUT comes after

I think I did not pointed to well my idea in the forth paragraph which was meant to be more an disadvantage of the single sex education than an advantage of the co-educational system.

Please, any further suggestion is more than welcome!

[Richard]

Hi Aanca.

you are right, In some cases. thanks for your caring about my point and thanks for your own points and comments.
1-2-3 point were ok! From another dimension. Please accept my sincere apologies.
I did it in haste, that's why I didn't get some of your viewpoints and I made some mistakes.
I wish you luck.
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