#16 (permalink) Thu Sep 10, 2009 13:48 pm boys and girls should attend separate schools |
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Thank you all, it is a very good way to shape up myself. I agree with almost all of your comments, but I have also some questions for Richard.
1 the main purpose of education is to prepare an individual(OUR INDIVIDUALITY, individual is an adjective) for the life; here I have used INDIVIDUAL as a noun not as an adjective;
2 relationship with the opposite sex is not very well established(UNDERSTANDABLE) I think that If I do not use ESTABLISHED, I would rather use UNDERSTOOD than UNDERSTANDABLE
3 (HOWEVER,)others would say that boys excel under stress and girls adapt more easily to a new language, BUT I think that this is not a good reason to make this segregation.
I din not use HOWEVER in that position because a BUT comes after
I think I did not pointed to well my idea in the forth paragraph which was meant to be more an disadvantage of the single sex education than an advantage of the co-educational system.
Please, any further suggestion is more than welcome! |
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Aanca I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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