Many people have pets. Other people don't.

[Silky]

Many people have pets. Other people don't. In your opinion, is it a good idea to have a pet, such as a bird, dog, or cat? Why or Why not?

In the world there are lots of people who have pets, and there are different reasons why people do. In some families these pets are treated like actual family members. On the other hand some people who don’t own pets cannot understand why others people have pets and treated them as they do. Although some people think it is good idea to have pets but I think it is not favorable. Being a pet owner is never easy. While pets bring us joy and companionship on a daily basis, they also require training, veterinary care, time, love, attention, and even tolerance. If you are living alone, pets are really good to give you company but you have to do extra activity just for only pets.

How do you feel if you loose your freedom? Have you ever think about it? If you are living in small apartment or big house, in both cases boundaries are fixed for your pets. Even if you are treating them like a family member, who has given you right to put them in place like cage for them. God give them liberty. Then there is no right to that freedom from them. However if you really want help them, you should leave them in forest or park or in there world there are lots of homeless, you can you give some money as a donation to provide shelter them.

In addition some times pets are not healthy for human. Studies show that approximately one forth percent of the population is allergic to dogs or cats. Even though Pets are really good to reduce your stress but some time causes serious health problem. In that case all pet owners need to take their pets for routine check-up. I got one dog during my high school and surprisingly she became the important part of our family. Even we visited to the veterinarian but my uncle suffered serious health problem due to dog. This causes extra burden paying for visits to the veterinarian.

In conclusion clearly pets bring love, companionship and safety. In contrast Pets creates nuisance. Pets are demanding in time and can be quite costly. Therefore I suggest not having a pet is better than having one.

[Richard]

Hi Silky.
congratulation! beautiful essay!
However, in some cases you didn't follow your main idea cohesively. I know that it's hard and also it's my problem too.
In the world there are lots of people who have pets, and there are different reasons why people do (HAVE). In some families these pets are treated like actual family members. On the other hand some people who don’t (DO NOT, don’t use short forms in your essays) own pets cannot understand why others people have pets and treated them as they do(GIVE). Although some people think it is good idea to have pets but I think it is not favorable. Being a pet owner is never easy. (While is not in need,=Actually,) pets bring us joy and companionship on a daily basis, they also require training, veterinary care, time, love, attention, and even tolerance. If you are living alone, pets are really good to give (ENJOY) you company but you have to do extra activity just for only pets.

How do you feel if you loose your indecency? Have you ever think about it? If (WHETHER) you are living in small apartment or big house, in both cases boundaries are fixed for your pets. Even if you are treating them like a family member, who has given you (THE)right to put them in place like cage for them.(?) God give them liberty. Then there is no right to that freedom from them (there is no right to limit there freedom.) However if you really want help them, you should leave them in forest or park or in there world there are lots of homeless, you can you give some money as a donation to provide shelter (FOR)them.
Therefore I suggest not having a pet is better than having one( more or something....).
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Let me know whether you have any suggestions or you suppose that I'm wrong.
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[Silky]

Thank you Richard for your comments.It gives confidence.

Really you are good in correction.you did a great Job! Thanks!

Yes in some cases I am going out of the main idea.My test is on the 10th Oct so any other suggestion is greatly appreciated.