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#2 (permalink) Sat Sep 12, 2009 14:58 pm Past Simple vs Present Perfect |
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I tried to fill the spaces up myself and this is what I came up with:
I'm writing to tell you all the lastest family news. Aunt Daisy had had a baby girl a week ago. Uncle Nick is very pleased. They named the baby Louise. Uncle Bruce had bought a new car and he gave the old one to Aunt Celia. Do you remember my cousin Rupert? Well, he has moved to Germany last month. He took his wife and children with him. Grandpa took Alex on a fishing trip last weekend. Unfortunately, they didn't catch any fish! Grandma has recently redecorated the living room. She painted the walls pink and bought a new carpet to match. It looks lovely. That's all for now. Take care and write soon with your news.
Correct me if I'm wrong, please. |
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Ratt I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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#3 (permalink) Sun Sep 13, 2009 15:00 pm Past Simple vs Present Perfect |
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| Thanks Ratt. Have somebody got any more ideas? |
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Pedro8686 I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#4 (permalink) Mon Sep 14, 2009 6:02 am Past Simple vs Present Perfect |
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Hello, I came up with an idea a little bit different from Ratt... Please correct me if I'm wrong. ================================
I'm writing to tell you all the latest family news. Aunt Daisy had a baby girl a week ago. // simple past is suitable for "ago" Uncle Nick is very pleased. They named the baby Louise. Uncle Bruce bought a new car and he gave the old one to Aunt Celia. // simple past is good enough since these are a series of events happening in the past. Do you remember my cousin Rupert? Well, he has moved to Germany last month. // simple past b/c of "last" signal.
He took his wife and children with him. Grandpa took Alex on a fishing trip last weekend. Unfortunately, they didn't catch any fish! Grandma has recently redecorated the living room. She painted the walls pink and bought a new carpet to match. It looks lovely. That's all for now. Take care and write soon with your news. _________________ Thank you very much,
Hieu Phan.
P/s: Please just correct if I'm wrong somewhere! |
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Hieupt I'm here quite often ;-)
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#5 (permalink) Mon Sep 14, 2009 7:05 am Hi, I'm new user |
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My name is Jackie, I live in New York Cityfor three years. I was born in Paris, France and move to New York City after college. I work in local TV station.I like to watch 24h
Kisses, Jackie |
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#6 (permalink) Mon Sep 14, 2009 21:30 pm Past Simple vs Present Perfect |
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| Hieupt wrote: |
Well, he has moved to Germany last month. // simple past b/c of "last" signal.
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Here must be "moved", not "has moved" because you have a particular time given - "last month". |
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Pedro8686 I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#7 (permalink) Tue Sep 15, 2009 0:53 am Past Simple vs Present Perfect |
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| Pedro8686 wrote: |
| Hieupt wrote: |
Well, he has moved to Germany last month. // simple past b/c of "last" signal.
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Here must be "moved", not "has moved" because you have a particular time given - "last month". |
You are right! I forgot to remove the "has" as my explanation said "simple past"! :) _________________ Thank you very much,
Hieu Phan.
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Hieupt I'm here quite often ;-)
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