| Have you seen or had any chamber pots without handles before? | Growing up. |
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#1 (permalink) Wed Sep 16, 2009 19:31 pm The Whispering Grass. |
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Listen, listen to the grass, It's whispering to you. Especially in the morning, When it's glistening with dew. There's a message that it's telling you, A message from each blade. Recalling all the things you said, The promises you made. The things you said, And didn't mean. You said them just the same, For love was never real to you, You saw it as a game. But now your heart is broken, The tables have been turned. Now she's turned away from you, The one whose love you spurned. Next time you listen to the grass, Pay heed to what it says. Or you will live a lonely life. Alone, you'll end your days.
Kitos. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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Kitosdad Language Coach

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#2 (permalink) Wed Sep 16, 2009 20:36 pm The Whispering Grass. |
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Hi Bill,
What a great piece!
Perhaps you could write something about solace? |
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SkiIucK I'm here quite often ;-)
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#3 (permalink) Thu Sep 17, 2009 5:40 am Solace. |
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The meaning and definition of solace is to find comfort and to alleviate grief, pain, and anger. -------------------------------------------------------------------------
Where do you turn for comfort When everything's gone wrong. Who is it that you search for The one for whom you long. What can you do when they aren't there To help you with your pain. Who is there now to shelter you When you're crying in the rain. Friends can't really find the words, They know just how you feel. They know we all will suffer this, They know your grief is real. Even though you know he loves you As down your lonely road you plod, You turn your eyes to Heaven above And scream your rage at God.
Kitos.
Good morning Ski. Things have been worse, I'm sure, but I can't remember when. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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#4 (permalink) Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:14 am The Whispering Grass. |
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Great job, Kitosdad! Both of these poems are wonderful! Miraculous words! It's so simply and at the same time, you are saying the facts of life... |
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Little_Mermaid I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#5 (permalink) Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:06 am For Ski ... Solace |
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Thank you, Bill; I appreciate it. Yet another great work from you.
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| Things have been worse, I'm sure, but I can't remember when. |
That's interesting. |
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SkiIucK I'm here quite often ;-)
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