It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn.

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There are several reasons for which man is working like, to get prestige, knowledge, to live happy life, to earn money etc. Money is variable, but
knowledge is not. If you have knowledge then money will automatically march towards you. So it is more important to work at a job where you can get
knowledge as well as you will enjoy. There are several examples to prove this. First example is, suppose there are two employers. One is having 6 lakh salary
per annum and another one has 4 lakh salary per annum. The work of an employee who has 6 lakh salary is to do regular work. In short to apply thereotical
knowledge in to practical. But another employee has work that provides him lot of knowledge other than what he studied in his college life. Then first
employee will enjoy the job till the end of a year but second one will enjoy it till his retirement. The reason for that is, the first employee will get
bore by doing same work everyday. As time passes, he will not feel the charm in doing work. But in case of second one, at the end of the day he will feel
knowledgable and proud. So from this example we can conclude that, only money can not satisfies once life.
Second example is of my best friend subodh, He and his father both are chartered accountant. During his graduation he was vary crazy about money.
So that after graduation, he searched for a job where he can get more money. But after 6 months he realized that he is doing the same work that he can do
in his fathers office. So what is new in that? Then after, he joined a company which can give him more knowledge than money. So from this example, we can
conclude that Only money is not every thing in once life.
To top it all, if i have better knowledge then, i will automatically assigned by several companies related to my field. And i will definately enjoy
to do the things that gives me better knowledge.

please check this and tell me my mistakes if any.

[Kitosdad]

There are several reasons (why a) man (works); to get prestige, (gain)knowledge, (and) (to)live (a)happy life, (by earning) money etc.
Money is variable, but knowledge is not. If you have knowledge then money will automatically march towards you,(so) it is more important to work at a job where you can get knowledge as well as enjoy(ment).

There are several examples to prove this.
First example, suppose there are two employe(e)s. One is (earning) 6 lakh salary
per annum and another one (earns) 4 lakh salary per annum.
The work of an employee who has 6 lakh salary is to do regular work. In short to (convert)(theoretical) knowledge (into) practical (usage).
But another employee has work that provides him (with) lot(s) of knowledge other than what he studied in his college life.
Then first employee will enjoy the job until the end of a year, but (the) second one will enjoy it (until) his retirement.
The reason for that is, the first employee will get bore(d) by doing same work everyday. As time passes, he will not feel the (pleasure) in doing (this)work.
But in (the) case of (the) second one, at the end of the day he will feel
knowledgeable and proud.
So from this example we can conclude that, only (earning)money (cannot satisfy ones) life.

The second example is of my best friend (S)ubodh. He and his father (are both) chartered accountant(s).
During his graduation he was v(e)ry crazy about money.
After graduation, he searched for a job where he can get more money.
But after 6 months he realized that he is doing the same work that he (had been doing)
in his fathers office.
So what is new in that? (After that), he joined a company which (gave) him more knowledge than money.
So from this example, we can conclude that money is not (everything) in (ones) life.

To top it all, if (I) have better knowledge then (I) will automatically (be) assigned by several companies related to my field, and (I)will definitely (better) enjoy (doing) things that give me (greater) knowledge.

This is a little better Sm, but you need to think more about what you are writing.

Kitos.
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M really Thankfullv to u Kitos.
Ill definatly improve.

[Afaq]

After graduating the university the next step for us is to get a job.Working is considered to be very crucial activity,because we need to have a position for we should earn money and not to waste our time.Some people who have a good job earn a lot of money although they do not like it.The most necessary thing for them is the amount of payment they receive,hence those kind of people do not care about how exciting the job is.However i believe that,it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy .In the following paragraphs i want to support my point of viewby giving spesific reasons and examples.
First of all, i want to demonstrate that,while working,what we should do firstis to create strong desire in order to do a good job.As a result of strong wish better result will be achieved.That is,work done willingly will lead to perfect result.One of the best examples for it is the job that i work at.As i enjoy translating various materialsinto our native language and vice-verca,a perfect product is achieved.Besides,i finish my work in time,sometimes earlier,for i have great desire to carry out this.In addition,the job which we work at does notmake us tired so early if we get pleasure from it.
Furtermore,working at a job that we gwt pleasure from bad mental conditions,such as depression.What i want to illustrate is that,we spend almost the whole dayworking at job.If the job is not exciting for us,our nerves can be soiled by boring job.The result of this is nothing else but resignation from that job.On the contrary,if we enjoy our job,not any such problems will be met and we will work even the whole hours with great pleasure,as well as will improve and specialize in the area that we work.So,the more interesting the job is,the more succesful we will be.
On the contrary,sometimes the ideas that i made do not work.Because there are some people who posses well-paid job,but they are not attracted by that.However they are forced to work because of need for money and as her husband died,she must work in order to keep her large familiy.
In conclusion,taking into consideration my points and examples made in the paragraphs,i want to show that, no matter what kind of job we have,well-paid or not,the important thing is that,we should work at a job that we enjoy.Because,this will lead to succesful,qualified work done by us,and also have fun

i hope ma essay's score will be high:)