TOEFL® essay sample: What are some qualities of good parent?

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Topic:- what are some qualities of good parent? Time:- 35 min. words:- 320

It is said that parents are the best teacher of their child. This is because after being born,a child is initially taught by his/her parents.
But only good parents can become good teachers of their children. To become a good parents, there are some important qualities that parents should have.
First and most important quality is that parents should have friendly nature with their children. It will help to reduce the generation gap between children
and parents. Second important quality is that they should have faith in their child. It will help to create a bond of attachment between parents and
children. Third quality is, rather than putting restriction and framing rules for children,they should be made aware of goods and bads in life. To keep the
free enviornment, parents should do a healthy discussion with child about their study as well as in leasiure time they should discuss the prons and cons of
other things as well.
As parents are good thinkers as well as a good advisors for their child, like wise they should be good listeners also. They should listen to there
child, that means they should be given an opportunity to their child to speak his/her mind. Parents should be supportive to their child. Because child wants
the support of their parents at every stage of the their life, so instead of demoralizing them, they should support and help him/her in taking a fair
decision.
If there is a strong bond of love, affection and faith between the parents and their chilren then children can not even think to leave their parents
in future. So according to my point of view, the parents who have all these qualities those parents are the best and bestest buddies of their children.

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Topic:- what are some qualities of good parent? Time:- 35 min. words:- 320

It is said that parents are the best teacher(s) of their child. This is because after being born,a child is initially taught by his/her parents.
But only good parents can become good teachers of their children.
To become good parents, there are some important qualities that parents should have.

(The) first and most important quality, is that parents should have friendly nature(s) (toward) their children.
It will help to reduce the generation gap between children and parents.

(The) second important quality is that they should have faith in their child. It will help to create a bond of attachment between parents and children.

(The) third quality is, rather than putting restriction and framing rules for children,they should be made aware of (the) goods and bads in life.
To keep the free enviornment, parents should (make) an healthy discussion with (their) child(ren) about their stud(ies) as well as in leasure time they should discuss the pro's and con's of other things as well.

As parents are good thinkers as well as good advisors for their child, (likewise) they should be good listeners (too).
They should listen to the(ir) child, which means they should (give) an opportunity to their child to speak his/her mind.
Parents should be supportive to their child(ren), because (children need) the support of their parents at every stage of the their li(ves), so instead of demoralizing them, they should support and help him/her in taking a fair decision.

If there is a strong bond of love, affection and faith between the parents and their chilren, then children (cannot) even think to leave their parents in (the) future.

So according to my point of view, the parents who have all (of) these qualities, (then) those parents are the best and (greatest) buddies of their children.

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