College time is the best time in person's life. Agree or disagree?

[Sm]

Topic:- College time is the best time in person's life. Agree or disagree? Time:- 35 min words:- 319

The most cherished period in a persons life is his college time. Everybody profoundly remembers those golden moments. There are several reasons for
this. Firstiy, in school time, the cildren are kept under observation and have to strictly follow rules and regulations. They can not take their own
decisions independantly. But as they grow up, they crave to be independent and take decisions on their own. The environment in college gives them this
freedom and a sense of self satisfaction.
Secondly, in school, the teachers are focused only on the academic aspects. On the contrary, in college professors pay attention to the overall
personality development of students in addition to studies. This can be corroborated by the celebration of college days as signature day, chocolate day,
rose day etc. So students get enjoyment apart from knowledge.
Another important reason is college gives opportunity to make lots of friends from different places and backgrouds.Also spending time with them
helps to gain knowledge as well as teaches one how to judge people,thus providing valuable experiences. Next reason is that in College time one starts
becoming aware of his/her reponsibilities. Instead of taking things for granted one starts thinking rationally. For example,one starts making budget during
college time to economising needs.
Last but not the least,one becomes conscious of career. Its like a time like do or die. It teaches one to strike the right balance between mirth and
work. From this period students start taking the challenges of life seriously. It also creates a propensity to accept challenges.
So we can conclusively draw that, college time is indeed the best time which fills his/her life with sweetness and at the same time prepares him/her
for the challenges of life. prepares the student to face different situation. It also makes them all rounder.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Comparative Religion

[Kitosdad]

Topic:- College time is the best time in person's life. Agree or disagree? Time:- 35 min words:- 319

The most cherished period in a person's life is (their) college time.
Everybody profoundly remembers those golden moments.
There are several reasons for this.

Firstly, in school time, the c(h)ildren are kept under (close) observation and have to strictly follow rules and regulations. They (cannot) (m)ake their own decisions independently. But as they grow up, they crave to be independent and (m)ake decisions on their own. The environment in college gives them this freedom and a sense of self satisfaction.

Secondly, in school, the teachers are focused only on the academic aspects.
On the contrary, in college professors pay attention to the overall
personality development of students in addition to (their) studies.
This can be corroborated by the celebration of college days as signature day, chocolate day, rose day etc.
So students get enjoyment apart from knowledge.

Another important reason is (that) college (provides an) opportunity to make lots of friends from different places and backgrou(n)ds.
Also spending time with them helps to gain knowledge as well as teaches one how to judge people,thus providing valuable experiences.

(The) next reason is that in College time one starts becoming aware of his/her re(s)ponsibilities.
Instead of taking things for granted one starts thinking rationally.

For example,one starts making budget (decisions) during college time to economising (their) needs.

Last but not the least,one becomes conscious of (one's future) career.
It's a time to do or die.
It teaches one to strike the right balance between mirth and work.
From this period students start taking the challenges of life seriously.
It also creates a propensity to accept challenges.

So we can conclusively draw that, college time is indeed the best time which fills his/her life with sweetness and at the same time prepares him/her for the challenges of life. (It) prepares the student to face different situation(s). It also makes them (an) all rounder.

Sm, this is your best work to date. You are progressing well.
Avoid rushing your last paragraph, as you tend to make silly mistakes, which might make a mockery of your previous good work. Very well done. :) :)

Kitos.
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