Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors.

[Silky]

Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors. Others people prefer to spend their leisure time indoors. Would you prefer to be outside or would you prefer to be inside for your leisure activities? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.

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Life demands change. Have you ever wondered why the different season comes every year? If whole year the weather is same, you will never find your life interesting. In the same way our routine life demands some change. Those changes we can bring in our life by spending some leisure time. Moreover living all the time in the same place is really boring, playing same game again and again creates only mundane nothing else. People can enjoy different type of outdoor activities. So I would prefer to spend free time outdoors.

Population is growing continuously. Mostly people are living in small space except few people. Apartments are very small. There is no place for play. If someone has a little time to enjoy, it is good idea to spend some time in outdoor activities. Sometime people can got beach, park or on long drive. They can go to Golf Course, camping, Hiking or ski. In this way each time you would be able to feel different amusement.

Secondly spending time outdoor is good for health also. Health is our most important concern. If health is good man can enjoy their life all the way. Spending some time in fresh air is very important in our life. Life keeps us so busy even sometime we forgot to breathe, isn't it amazing how we can forget to do something so basic. So simply spend some time outside. Be relaxed and breathe the fresh air Thus, it distracts us from our worries. Enjoying this way you will be more productive at work also.

To sum up there is no doubt that home is the most comfortable place but there are unlimited things in the world to explore so why should we waste our time in tiny home? Your whole life will be short to know enjoy everything. World is the bundle of diversity and you have opportunity to taste it. So why not spend some leisure time in outdoor activity.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and a university service representative

[Kitosdad]

Life demands change. Have you ever wondered why the different season(s) come every year?
If (during the) whole year the weather (was the) same, you (would) never find your life interesting.
In the same way (the routine of our life) demands some change.
(We can bring these changes into our lives) by spending some leisure time.
Moreover, living all the time in the same place is really boring, playing (the) same game again and again creates only (boredom) nothing else.
People can enjoy different type(s) of outdoor activities. So I would prefer to spend (my) free-time outdoors.

The (worlds) population is growing continuously. Mostly people are living in (smaller spaces) except (a) few (lucky/rich)people.
Apartments are very small. There is no (space) for play(ing).
If someone has a little (spare) time to enjoy (themselves), it is good idea to spend some time in outdoor activities.
Sometime people can (go to the) beach, (a) park or on (a) long drive. They can go to (a) golf course, camping, hiking or skiing. In this way, each time (they) would be able to (enjoy) different amusement(s).

Secondly spending time outdoor(s) is good for (your) health (too).
Health is our most important concern.
If (their) health is good (people) can enjoy their li(ves) (in many ways).

Spending some time in the fresh air is very important in our li(ves). Life keeps us so busy (that) sometime we (even) forg(e)t to breathe.
(I)sn't it amazing how we can forget to do something so basic.
So simply spend some time outside. Be relaxed and breathe the fresh air.
Thus, it distracts us from our worries. Enjoying (your life) this way, you will be more productive at work (too).

To sum up; there is no doubt that home is the most comfortable place, but there are unlimited things in the world to explore, so why should we waste our time in (our) tiny home(s)?
Your whole life will be (too) short to enjoy everything.
The world is (a) bundle of diversity and you have (the) opportunity to taste it.

So why not spend some leisure time in (pursuing) outdoor activit(ies)(?)

Interesting essay. Well done.

Kitos.
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[Silky]

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