IELTS Writing Skills - 3

[Deepakk]

Hi

I am giving the IELTS exam in the second week of December this year. I have decided to do self study for the exam. I am hoping if someone can provide any feedback on my writing skills and give me some advise to improve my writing skills and also some advise to avoid any grammatical errors.

I will be submitting few letters every week and I hope everyone will be OK with this

Regards
Deepak

Dear Sir,

I am writing with regard to booking a room in your hotel. I will be arriving on 3rd October, 2009 and will check out on 5th October, 2009. I checked the
prices of other hotels on the internet in the same area, but did not find any hotel which provides this sort of accommodation in such a good price.

I would like to book a two bedroom apartment with a separate living room.The apartment should have private balcony and should have water views. I probably do
not need a kitchen area, but it should have atleast a microwave and basic cooking facilities. I usually do not cook, and I would prefer to eat in a restaurant. I am hoping there should be a good restaurant nearby.

Also I would like to book a cruise for Saturday evening. It would be grateful if you can organise the booking for the same. I will be paying by credit card when arrive at the hotel. Please let me know if these arrangements are ok with you or you want me to pay some advance. Also, let me know if late check out is possible.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Deepak

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[Bhap]

hi there i am new and i want some one to check my ielts writing