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#2 (permalink) Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:30 am OK, let's start writing! |
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Hello Kitosdad,
This is my translation from local language to English for my director who came from foreign country. So, I use fictive names for name and country. I hope you understand it. Please correct it, and thanks a lot for this chance to practice my English writing.
Government Facilitate Foreign Investor
Council of Minister discussed decree law for foreign investor that very important to facilitate foreign people investing in Z country. Secretary State of Council of Minister, R (people name) said that decree law which presented by Minister of Economics, A (people name) , and Minister of Finance, C (people name) , are opening the way for foreign investor to strengthen Z (country name) economics & development through investment that they want to invest. He said This decree will approve next month to facilitate Ministry of Economics and Ministry of Finance to attract foreign investor entering Z (country). |
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#3 (permalink) Wed Oct 14, 2009 10:34 am OK, let's start writing! |
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Government Facilitate Foreign Investor(s).
The Council of Minister(s) discussed (a) decree law for foreign investor(s) that (is) very important to facilitate foreign people investing in Z country. Secretary State of Council of Minister, R (people name) said that (the) decree law which (was) presented by (the) Minister of Economics, A (people name) , and (the) Minister of Finance, C (people name) , (would open) the way for foreign investor(s) to strengthen Z (country name) economics & development through investment. He said This decree will (be) approve(d) next month, to facilitate (the) Ministry of Economics and Ministry of Finance to attract foreign investor(s) entering Z (country).
Rosario, good morning. Your English is very good, and your attempt to translate shows that you are endeavoring to increase your understanding of it in a new and novel manner. Thank you for your input to this topic.
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#4 (permalink) Thu Oct 15, 2009 0:37 am OK, let's start writing! |
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Hello Kitosdad,
Many thanks for the correction.
Regards. |
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Rosario I'm here quite often ;-)

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#5 (permalink) Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:58 am OK, let's start writing! |
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Hello Kitosdad,
Its my duties to translate newspaper from local language to English everyday for my boss who just speaks English.
Thanks for your support. |
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Rosario I'm here quite often ;-)

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#6 (permalink) Thu Oct 15, 2009 6:31 am OK, let's start writing! |
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hello kitos i am sad because i donīt find a job it is problem , but a am happy because i can learn english perhaps when a learned i could teach childrens . i donīt have a lot of friends and thats why know have problem with my job. in this country if you donīt have good relatios you can not find a good job. but i am not fatalist and every day a go to knoc and noc the doors and i know one door it is going to be open and this moment i take advantege learning english at list. well itīs done. thanks ARI. :cry: |
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Arigirl You can meet me at english-test.net

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#7 (permalink) Thu Oct 15, 2009 10:34 am OK, let's start writing! |
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Hello Kitos, I am sad because I can't find a job. It is a problem, but I am happy because I can learn English her when I am not working. When I have learned enough perhaps I could teach children. I donīt have a lot of friends and that's why I now have a problem with my job-hunting. In this country if you donīt have good relations you cannot find a good job, but I am not a fatalist, and every day I go and knock and knock on the doors, and I know one door is going to stay open. At the moment I am gaining the advantage of having English on my list of qualifications.
Good morning Ari. I know just how you feel, but unlike you I am too old to be offered a job. You have the future to look forward to and every incentive to improve your English skills.
Please allow me to help you;I have edited your post for you. One further point; ALWAYS use a capital I, and not an i when talking about yourself. All sentences should be started with a Capital letter.
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#8 (permalink) Thu Oct 15, 2009 16:57 pm how to use " , : ; ' in sentence construction. |
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Hi everybody,
please. help me I'm confuse now:
could you explain me this ( , ; ' ) how to use it in appropriate in paragraph.
how do you explain these:
Fox's singer's other's
and the rest.
thank you! CaRLOS MANILA |
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#9 (permalink) Thu Oct 15, 2009 18:06 pm how to use " , : ; ' in sentence construction. |
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Carlos, you would get a faster response if you were to post your question on the Grammar thread.
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#10 (permalink) Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:39 pm OK, let's start writing! |
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hellow kitos I want to write about diwali,because i am from india and diwali is a indian fastival.diwali is a fastival of light.For this fastival we dacorate our house,first of all we cleane our whole house,wordrobes, kitchen,bedrooms,gardens.then we dacorate with lights,candles,colours,flowers.we make sweets,snakes.weprey godess laxmi.godess laxmi is the simble of money,and distribute sweets to our neabours.we go and visit our elders for blessings.tomorrow is diwali and today i am making sweets. thankyou |
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#11 (permalink) Fri Oct 16, 2009 15:17 pm OK, let's start writing! |
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Hello Kitos, I want to write about Diwali,because I am from india and Diwali is an Indian festival.
Diwali is a festival of light. For this faetival we decorate our house. First of all we clean our whole house,wardrobes, kitchen,bedrooms,gardens,then we decorate with lights, candles, colours and flowers.
We make sweets and cakes. We pray to the godess Laxmi. Godess Laxmi is the symbol of money, and then we distribute sweets to our neighbours.
We go and visit our elders for blessings.
Tomorrow is Diwali and today I am making sweets.
Suchita, thank you very much for telling us about your Festival of Light, and about the Godess Laxmi. Please offer up a prayer for me whilst you are praying. It sounds delightful, and I'm sure your home looks beautiful.
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#12 (permalink) Tue Oct 20, 2009 13:46 pm OK, let's start writing! |
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Hello Kitos. Thankyou for your reply.Diwly was on 17th and prayed also for you.For your long life,big bank blance,and ofcorse prossperety. it was 4days holiday here.now schools.collegesand offices are started again. Now today i am going to tell you about my self and my family.I am a married women.I am from north india,but i live in Mumbai. Mumbai is in state maharastra which is on west coast of India. I have two children ,they both are married.Elder one is my son.He has done his post graguation in telecomunication from glasgow.Younger one is daughter.she has done her manegment in international bussines.now she is working with hotel.
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Suchita You can meet me at english-test.net

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#13 (permalink) Thu Oct 22, 2009 0:43 am OK, let's start writing! |
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Hello Kitosdad,
Please help me by correct my resignation letter below.
Thanks in advance.
X, 20 October, 2009 H.E. Mr. John, Director
Subject: Resignation Letter
Excellency, I am writing to formally notify you that I am resigning from my position as Administrative Assistant on January 14, 2009. I apologize for not being able to provide two weeks notice. However, I regret that, due to circumstances beyond my control, I need to resign immediately. Thank you for the support and the opportunities that you have provided me during the last several years. I have enjoyed working for the agency and appreciate the support provided me during my tenure with the company. Thank you very much for the opportunity to work for (Company Name).
CC: 1. Mr. Tom, Finance Officer 2. Mrs. Ann, Administration Coordinator
Sincerely yours,
Dyana |
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Rosario I'm here quite often ;-)

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#14 (permalink) Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:04 am OK, let's start writing! |
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Good morning Rosario. Your letter is well written, but I suggest you re-title it ;
Notice of resignation.
Additionally you might spend some time pondering the date of penning your letter, and the date that the resignation becomes effective.
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#15 (permalink) Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:03 am OK, let's start writing! |
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Thank you very much Kitosdad.
Regards. |
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Rosario I'm here quite often ;-)

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