I am planning to write some kind of story but I am so bad at grammar...

[Moonacre]

Hello everyone,

I am planning to write some kind of story but i am so bad at grammar.. I wrote some thing and I need somebody to read it and tell me how is my writing.. I hope to help me because I need to improve myself in writing..so, can I post what I wrote here and check it out for me, please?

Thanks,

[Kitosdad]

Moonacre, please post your text on the Essay thread. It will get prompt attention there.

Kitos.
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[Arash88]

your grammar mistakes amended in during of the time, I think.
Arash