#2 (permalink) Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:45 am TOEFL@essay |
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[quote="Sandy_321"]
The topic under discussion is about (the skills) a person should possess in order to be successful in today's world. In my opinion communication is by far the most important skill a person should possess for success. In the following paragraphs the need for communication will be highlighted. Firstly, I believe that communication is important (in) that in day to day life we need to communicate to do things. If communication is crystal clear then we get the results we expect.
For example, in a company, if (the) boss explains the needs,skills, kind of work (and) policies well to all employees, then (the) productivity of the workers increases, (therefore the) company also prospers At times companies have to make deal(s) with clients from other countries. If (the) company's policies (and) capabilities are well explained (to him) then client can get (an) overall picture and (the) deal may (well) be successful. (The) use of communication is not limited to (only) work. (It) is used in every walk of life.
Secondly, I think communication is indelible for success( in) that almost 50% of (our) life (is spent) in communicating with others,so obviously if we cannot communicate clearly, then we are at gun-point.
For example if a person goes to another country for (a) business purpose and need(s) to attend (an) important meeting (somewhere), if (that) person cannot communicate (his) exact (destination) to (the) driver, he (may well) miss the deal.
(Another) reason (why) I think communication is important for success is the standing examples we have in history. Most of (our) leaders are good communicators.They have become leaders by communicating their ideas,beliefs so that people can trust and follow them. Finally, I think communication is (the) catalyst to attain success. (Everyone) should endeavour to find (the) weak points in their (own manner of) communicati(ng) and (attempt to) overcome them.
Only then (can one) succeed in life.
Because of the above reasons I think in today's ever-changing world, communicating well will pave our path to success. _________________ If you need me, I'm here. |
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Kitosdad I'm a Communicator ;-)

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