Could you please correct the essay I wrote on 'edema'?

[Med Guest]

I am an Italian med student. My teacher asked me to write a short text about edema. I do not speak English very well. Thus, I ask someone of you to correct my text in grammar and language. The text is at http://digilander.libero.it/hales/oedema.htm Make your correction and send me an e-mail.

[Goldhat]

Thanks for sharing, but that link does not work anymore.
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Joel Milne,
English-Test.net Developer

[Esl_Expert]

Hi Goldhat,

I'm curious. How in the world did you happen to reply to that post today? Did you notice that it was posted back in 2005? Did the system have some sort of 'burp' that brought it back to 'current' status?

Just curious...

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[Goldhat]

It is a goal on the forum that all posts will have a minimum of 1 reply, so I search for the oldest posts without a reply and answer them. Some of these really old posts from guests might also be pruned, either way we want to get the number of posts with 0 replies from the current nearly 5,000 down to 0.
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Joel Milne,
English-Test.net Developer

[Esl_Expert]

Ah, ha! I see. So, right now you're working on threads that consist only of the (one) original post.

Will you also be catching up on the other unanswered posts? There must be hundreds (probably thousands) of unanswered posts in threads that already contain more than just the original post. Looks like you've got your work cut out for you. I get tired just thinking about the prospect of somebody trying to catch up with all of the unanswered posts. Whew! You're a brave man indeed.

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