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Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree?
The issue at hand is whether (or not) school teachers should be evaluated by (their) students. In my opinion teachers (should) be evaluated because, as (the) source of knowledge provider, they play an important role in sharing the knowledge.
So, if (the) source itself is not good then (the development) of students will also not be good. In the following paragraphs I will explain the reasons for having (the) above opinion.
Firstly;Teachers are the people who provide a role model and (the) motivation to students.
(If they are not good for match then education will go for a toss) Very bad sentence to be used in an essay!!
(E)very quarter students get tested, (therefore I feel that) teachers should also be tested/evaluated based on their performance. The students who have been taught should(be permitted to do an) evaluation(of the teacher) so that teachers come to know about their weak points, and the things that students don't like about him/her.
This will really benefit both teachers and students. From (a) students point of view he/she will get a chance to express his/her feelings about the quality of (the) teaching (that they are receiving). From (the) teachers point of view, they will come to know about (their own) short comings in their way of teaching, and hence will (find) some room for improvement.
Secondly;The education system should be (a) two-way system. That is, both teachers and students should bridge the gap between them by providing feedback on each others performance. If it is always (only) one way, then the students are the one(s) who are going to (bear) the brunt. In addition to (the) above, this evaluation system also helps (the) school administration to select appropriate people for the job.
For example, while hiring teachers, schools (should) put (a teacher) evaluation system as one of (their) criteria (before) making the job permanent.Further this can also be considered as a criteria (regarding) pay hikes
Finally I think this evaluation system (should) be made mandatory in all schools. This will definitely have some impact on teachers.
For example, teachers who get (a low) rating may be motivated to excel in their jobs. Overall there are more pros in having (a) teachers evaluation system than cons. Government should step forward and introduce this system as early as possible. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A strongly worded essay Sandy, but worthy of debate.(25) Pay attention to your comma placement.
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