Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school

[Nerry]

Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Now a days, in most schools students are encouraged to do physical exercise at least for a small period of time. However, some people think it is not essential to have such a period and it wastes time which students have for studying.
I strongly disagree with this argument as there are a lot of advantages that a student can get by doing physical exercise everyday.

Moreover, by refreshing doing a physical exercise before work, they might feel better and easy when studying. Normally Students come to the school in the morning in a sleepy manner. After doing physical exercise they looks active and energetic. This activeness lead them to do other activities like reading, writing, dancing, speaking or debating in the school more successfully. They show a big difference in enrolling activities, after exercise.

With out any doubt, physical exercise helps to develop human heath physically and mentally. Recent researches have shown that exercise is essential to keep up a good health in the body. It helps to burn extra calories and to control the body weight which usually leads to many heath problems like high blood pressure, diabetics etc. On the other hand, it is good for our respiratory system since it increases our Oxygen in take. School is the best place to encourage people to do exercisers. In deed, It helps to release the stress of students. They are normally studying all the day long. It develops stress in their mind and this stress effects their brain cells if they are overloaded by the studies. Go out the class room for a moment and do exercise helps them to release their stress because exercise keeps their exhausted mind some time away from the lessons.

Of course, students go to school for learning. They have long time period for their studies at school. Some might think that, the time they have to learn would waste by allocating a period for exercise. When compared to the time they have to study, 10 or 15 minutes exercise period is not considerable and when considering the advantages that student could have, it is worth to have, at least 10 or 15 minutes physical exercise period in the school time schedule.

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[Samantha Alvarez]

Essay Question :Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

These days, many people talk about the necessity of physical exercise in school days. Some of them think that it is not necessary for the students and according to them students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. In my opinion, physical exercises should be a required part of the school days.

First of all, physical exercises make students fresh both mentally and physically. They are not able to study all the time without taking a break. While they are studying, the students should have a concentration. They have to consume their energies. Children with school ages need to consume their energies than the elders. Therefore it is necessary for the children to fresh their mind and consume their over energies.

Secondly, physical exercises should be part of our life whether how we are old. Sports are the main part of human’s healthy life. It helps to relax and reduce the stress. All the students during their school life have to face lots of exams, homework, projects, etc. They spend their education life in a deep stresses. That’s why the physical exercises are very important for the student to get ride of their stress.

Lastly, unfortunately fast food became a very common especially for the children. They prefer eating fast foods than homemade cooks. So it makes obesity problem. Because of that reason, not to face with obesity problem students should do physical exercise. These exercises are not only gymnastic exercises but also students can run, play football, tennis, soccer, etc.

To sum up, sports are very important for our healthy life. We are expecting to the students would get a successful carrier. To be successful, students needs to fresh mind and healthy body.

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[Richard]

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[Esha21]

In most schools, students are encouraged to take physical exercise, while many people thinks taking physical exercise as a part of day at school is not necessary and student should spend their all time in studies at school. However I believe, taking physical exercise as a part of day at school is beneficial and must be required to students for several reasons.

First, normally students come to the school in the morning in sleepy manner. A physical exercise before the academic classes makes students active and energetic. Exercise rejuvenates supine muscles of the body. Students feel fresh that freshness and activeness leads them to do other activity such reading, listening, writing and more successfully. Everyone becomes bore bye doing any work regularly and desire for change. Games and yoga periods give a change and prevent from being bored.

Second, there is no doubt that physical exercise helps to develop human heath physically and mentally. Recent researches have shown that exercise is essential to keep up a good health in the body.
Unfortunately fast foods have become a very common especially for the children. They prefer eating fast foods than homemade cooks that often make obesity problem. Not to face with obesity problem, it becomes necessary for students to take physical exercise. Playing games such football, handball, basketball help to burn extra calories and to control the body weight which usually leads to many heath problems like high blood pressure, diabetics etc. in game of foot nerves become steady and every becomes quick by keenly watching the objects. In short, exercise has countless benefit for the person who takes them.

In addition, School is the best place to encourage people to do exercisers. In deed, It helps to release the stress of students. They are normally studying all the day long. It develops stress in their mind and this stress affects their brain cells if they are overloaded by the studies. Go out the class room for a moment and take exercise provides students relief from stress, because exercise keeps their exhausted mind some time away from the lessons.

To sum up, exercise help out one to keep physically and mentally well and such a child is more likely succeed in his or her academic studies. Playing is a for of exercise and in this instance, Spending at least 30 minutes out of 5 hours in physical exercise at school are more worthwhile therefore student must be required to take physical exercise as for part of each school day.

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[Nzuahp]

Hi Esha21,
You are new here and you seem not to know exactly where to post your work.
When you publish your essay below somebody's work, it attracts little attention.

So, post your essay under a new thread following the procedures Richard gave above.
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