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#1 (permalink) Mon Oct 26, 2009 15:37 pm The qualities of good friends. |
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The qualities of good friends.
Humans are social animals. Living together and developing relationship are compulsory social activities. Friends, as one of most foremost segments of our social life, carrying an important role. They are companies for life road, always by your side whenever you need. The qualities and behaviors of friends have a siginificant effect on our life. Thus, what are foremost qualities a good friend should possess. The follow reasons are supporting my pointview.
First, I think respect is vital. Respecting friends means trsut them, give some private space for them. Birds happy in that they have space to fly. Respect your friends, then let them to have some personal time and space to do something that they love. Besides, All of us has secrects, nobody wants to be gossiped by some else.Sometime, secrects are hurt. So, being respective is important quality for human beings, which friends have to give some time and space for one another. What is more, do not gossip secrets.
The next concernful quality that I realize is kindness. Being kinda means friends must treat others nice. Always think of someone else. Never hurt people. A good friend could open his/her heart for you, tell you what pure mind he/she has. Sharing his/her joy with you, and enjoy the beautiful times with you. Even, he/ she can do something in secret for you, which you embarrss to say. Thus, a good friend will always be there for you, whatever you need.
For instance, my father had a surgery years ago, my mother had to take care of him in hostipal. A friend of my mother's took me to her home and look after me until my father came home. That's a good friends should do.
Last important quality for a good friend, I think, is humor. Being humorous can keep us in a glad mood. We never fail to refuse sharing joyful time with a humor friend who can always bring us laughter. Keep us away from sad. Like colourful balloons, a humor friends could bring you pleased feelings.
Sure, I have to admit that there are a number of good qualities a good friend should have. Whereas, the three qualities I mentioned above are most significative.Respect, kindness, humour are great parts of a good friend.
I will appreciate if you could take a minute to read this essay and show me some opinions. Thanks you so much. |
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Svbla I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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#2 (permalink) Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:21 am The qualities of good friends. |
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[quote="Svbla"]The qualities of good friends.
Humans are social animals. Living together and developing relationship are compulsory social activities. Friends, as one of most foremost segments of our social life, perform an important role. They are company for our journey through this life, always by your side for whenever you need them. The qualities and behaviour of our friends has a significant effect on our life. Thus, what are foremost qualities a good friend should possess? The follow reasons are my point of view.
First, I think respect is vital. Respecting friends means trusting them by giving them some private space, like birds, happy in that they have space to fly. Respect your friends by letting them have some personal time and space, to do something that they love. Besides, all of us have secrets, nobody wants to be gossiped about by someone else. So, being respective is an important quality for human beings, which friends have to give some time and space for one another. What is more, do not gossip about secrets that your friend has entrusted you with.
The next quality that I appreciate is kindness. Being kind means friends must treat each other nice. Always think of someone else. Never hurt people. A good friend could open his/her heart to you, tell you what a pure mind he/she has. Sharing his/her joy with you, and by enjoying the beautiful times with you. Even, he/ she can do something in secret for you, which you are embarrassed to say. Thus, a good friend will always be there for you, whatever you need.
For instance, my father had surgery years ago. My mother had to take care of him in hospital. A friend of my mother's took me to her home and looked after me until my father came home. That's what good friends should do.
Last important quality for a good friend, I think, is humour. Humor shared with a friend always brings us laughter. Keeps us from being sad. Like colourful balloons, humourous friends can bring you happyfeelings.
Sure, I have to admit that there are a number of good qualities a good friend should have. Whereas, the three qualities I mentioned above are most significant.
Respect, kindness and humour are the best qualities of a good friend. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Much better Svbla. Keep it up.
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#3 (permalink) Tue Oct 27, 2009 9:30 am The qualities of good friends. |
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| Thanks, but, I don't understand what do you mean by much better. What better? |
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Svbla I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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#4 (permalink) Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:55 am The qualities of good friends. |
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much better
Your sentence structure has improved and you are using your imagination more.
Your writing "sounds" more English than before, with less corrections being required.
It is better.
Kitos. _________________ If you need me, I'm here. |
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Kitosdad I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#5 (permalink) Tue Oct 27, 2009 13:18 pm The qualities of good friends. |
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Weird... I don't get it... |
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Svbla I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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#6 (permalink) Tue Oct 27, 2009 15:06 pm The qualities of good friends. |
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Actually, you're right, it is weird, and you shan't get it again.
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Svbla I'm new here and I like it ;-)

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