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#2 (permalink) Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:12 am The film Last Samurai takes place in Japan |
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Sentence IV looks a bit odd to me: it probably means that the producers never recorded scenes with architectural backgrounds other than traditional Japanese; but then why doesn't it say so exactly? In addition, the link between III and V should be quite strong (III production of the film began ... V the rest of the film), but is strained by the incursion of IV. Note also that there is a break between II and III: with III should perhaps begin a new paragraph. |
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Cerberus™ I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#3 (permalink) Wed Oct 28, 2009 12:47 pm The film Last Samurai takes place in Japan |
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| I think IV, too, but the key is B |
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Volcano1985 I'm here quite often ;-)
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#4 (permalink) Wed Oct 28, 2009 22:05 pm The film Last Samurai takes place in Japan |
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| This exercise is not very clear; the text is not impossible as it is, but it could be made more coherent by improving it in several ways: there is not one thing about it that is clearly wrong while the rest is right. If I were you, I'd forget about this one. |
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Cerberus™ I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#5 (permalink) Thu Oct 29, 2009 2:12 am The film Last Samurai takes place in Japan |
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| I have the same feeling as Cerberus: just forget about it. :) |
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James I'm here quite often ;-)
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| phrase: between reality and ideal | "I invited her for a dinner.' OR 'I invited her to a dinner.'? |