a recommendation report?

[Binbin93]

Dear All,

I want to raise a recommendation to remove some of equipments, which are not use longtime and they are not in use any more, the report is:

" as orginal designed, we have two valves which were installed on vessel but they are not in use in the past and now, also based on our operation with daily liquid flow in the vessel, I would suggest and consider to demolish them to reduce maintenance cost/time.

should you have any comments, please advice,

best regards,

Anyone can help me to correct my report.

thank you very much.

[Mister Micawber]

As originally designed, there are two valves installed on the vessel, but they are not now and never have been in use. Based on the daily liquid flow in the vessel, I suggest that we eliminate them to reduce maintenance time and cost.

Should you have any comments, please advise.

Best regards,
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