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 #1 (permalink) Sun Nov 01, 2009 17:44 pm What is your approach to problem solving and how does it work for you? |
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The phrase problem-solving can be understand in many meanings solving problems in life, solving math problems, solving the problem of country and so on. But in any case I think the most important features for problem-solving are high motivation, obstinacy and hard working. However many people think that you must solve your problems in any way by which you can, I think that the way by which you want to solve your problem must not harm others.
Once I have problem with one of my teachers, because he has graded me unfairly. Everybody suggested me to go and speak with dean and tell him about my problem. But although I was very angry I did not it, instead I speak with my teacher and we have understood each other.
Several months ago I have disputed with my friend because he did some things wrong and after few days when I understood that you must not get narrow from my friend I have decide to speak with him and explain that he is wrong, and after that I was reconciled with him.
Last year I wanted to continue my study in abroad, I have taken several exams and I was accepted to one of the best universities in the world, but I have some problems with funding and I could not find sponsor and I stayed in my school, but I did not despaired instead I continued to study hard, and my obstinacy helped me and I took some more exams and I am sure that this year I will be accepted university which will have financial aid for me.
Taking into consideration all these examples from my own life experiment, we can conclude that the best methods of problem solving is high motivation, hard working, obstinacy and the ability to forgive.
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| #2 (permalink) Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:14 am What is your approach to problem solving and how does it work for you? Use sp |
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| Vahan wrote: |
Once I have problem with one of my teachers, because he has graded me unfairly. Everybody suggested me to go and speak with dean and tell him about my(your) problem. But although(Although) I was very angry I did not (do that)it, instead I speak with my teacher and we have understood each other.
Several months ago I have disputed with(disputed with) my friend because he did(had down) some things(something) wrong and after few days when I understood that you must not get narrow from my friend(what did you mean?)(1) I have decide(decide)to speak with him and explain(ed) that he is wrong, and after that I was reconciled with him.
Last year I wanted to continue my study in abroad(study abroad=be careful it's a common mistake), I have taken(took) several exams and I was accepted to (by) one of the best universities in the world, but I have (had) some problems with funding and I could not find(I could not have found a) sponsor and I stayed in my school, but I did not despaired instead I continued to study hard, and my obstinacy(diligence) helped me and I took some more exams and I am sure that this year I will be accepted (by a)university which will have financial aid(scholarships such as Fulbright Scholarship Rhodes Scholarship) for me.
Taking into consideration all these examples from my own life experiment, we can conclude that the best methods of problem solving is high motivation, hard working, obstinacy and the ability to forgive(to be patient) |
Problem solving is a compound noun, not a phrase.
usage of some words in the sentences you write seems not appropriate like:
obstinacy
and some grammatical mistakes.
(1)example: You've got a narrow view of what life is.
you have used some advanced words...pretty good.
Thanks.
Let me know if you have any suggestions.
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| #3 (permalink) Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:14 am What is your approach to problem solving and how does it work for you? |
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| Thanks a lot for your comments!!! |
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| #5 (permalink) Mon Nov 02, 2009 15:19 pm What is your approach to problem solving and how does it work for you? |
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| Thanks... And what do you think how much can I get from TOEFL writing? |
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| #6 (permalink) Mon Nov 02, 2009 23:45 pm What is your approach to problem solving and how does it work for you? |
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Hi Vahan
I have no idea about it...you should ask it from a teacher...when are you going to take it by the way?
In my opinion you have a problem with English grammar...If I were you, I'd try to enhance my grammar structure...just take a look at the tenses you have used in your essay. In some sentences you've used present perfect tenses, present tense with simple past tenses then past perfect and, ..If memory serves,...the use of passive and active tenses you used were not appropriate...If you fix them, it'll be much more better.
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| #7 (permalink) Tue Nov 03, 2009 17:40 pm What is your approach to problem solving and how does it work for you? |
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| My exam is in 21 of November. |
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