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Hi Alen, could you correct this text for me? #1 (permalink) Tue Nov 03, 2009 0:02 am   Hi Alen, could you correct this text for me?
 

A pencil’s tale
One day, a pencil maker talked to a pencil he had just made .He said, ”before I send you to the world , there are five tips I want you to bear in mind ,so that you can be as good as possible .First, you won’t be able to do vital things unless you are in one’s hands. Second, you will get sharpened from time to time, but this is important to make you a better one .Third, you will be able to correct whatever mistakes you commit . Forth, the best thing you ever have is the one you have inside.
No matter how the situation is ,you should keep writing .Finally , do not scrawl however bad it becomes”

The pencil understood and got in the pencil carton as a step to the world after it recognized why it was made for.
My friends, it is the same with you: if u want to be as good as possible , you should keep these five tips by heart. First, you will be capable of doing good deeds if you put yourself in God’ hands. On other hand , people will take to you for your skills. Second ,sometimes you will get hurt by problems you face ,but this is crucial to make a better person of you.
You will correct and cope with your faults. Forth, remember the best part of you is always the inner part. Fifth, Whichever way you walk in, u should leave your own trace .Regardless of any circumstances, be always a good servant of God .
Each one of us is like a pencil made for unique and special purposes . By the means of recall and understanding, let’s carry on our life trip having meaningful aims deep in our hearts and daily relation with God.
You are created for precious reasons
Some think that they have never existed and won’t be ever
Sometimes dreams seem difficult to come true
But we should do our best
However long it takes

If u believe in your dreams
If u believe in your self

You should know that
You can make them true

We blame the time instead of blaming ourselves
When it’s not the time’s fault
Had the time been able to talk
It would have blame us more

Life moves and time passes
This new day witnesses your deeds
Where are your effort and variation?
What about your dreams ?
What about your ambitions ?
Is that what you want?
How long will you keep silent?
How long will you keep weak?
How long will you give apologies?
How long will you keep lost?

You want to be ,but

Time
Place
Circumstances
Repeated failure
Self confidence
Hope
All are closed doors

So please do not blame others
Do not give in to failure
Trust yourself
Trust your ability
Show up
Make changes
Start with yourself
You can do it
You can make it
Hold to your motive
Aspiration, ability, reliance, conception and survival

It’s time to get over fear and be responsible
It’s time to make life better
It’s time for real variation
It’s time for dreams to come true.
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