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[Shahla]

Hi everybody'
I will be grateful if anybody revise this writing to me.Unfortunately it seems imposible to show the bar graph .
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information above. You should write at least 150 word
The bar graph shows fertility in Gulf countries in ten year period of time between 19990 and 2000.Based on this graph in all of these countries there are downward trend in the fertility. In the 1990 the highest rate of fertility belonged to Oman at 7 births per woman followed by Arabia at 6.8, Qatar at 4.2,UAE at 4.1,and then Kuwait and Bahrain at 3.5.However in 2000 the situation of Oman and Saudi Arabia changes and therefore in this year Saudi Arabia was the most fertile country in this region at 5.7 fertility followed by Oman at 5.6 and then Qatar at 3.5,UAE at 2.9 and then Kuwait at 2.8 and Bahrain at 2.4.As it can be seen in the graph the situation of Bahrain and Kuwait changed in 2000 compared with this situation in 19990.
We can find out from this graph that in the 1990 the most fertile country between Gulf countries was Oman and the least one was Kuwait then after ten years all figures decrease but not equall for all them .As a result in 2000 the highest figure belong to Saudi Arabia and the lowest one to Bahrain.

[Richard]