Essay: which is more important, studying at school or to relate with people?

[Tomasito]

I'd like to think like an old man, to have lot of knowledge. Sometimes knowledge is more important than intelligence.
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Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
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[Elliott]

Hello,

I wish I could write that good. The way you explain yourself in English language is wonderful. I did understand everything because the ideas are very organize and the sentences are perfect to me. Could you give me tips about who I can improve my writing skills, please?

Thank you,
Elliott

[Tomasito]

Hello Elliot!
I guess your question is directed to Naiverock. I also think that he writes very well. If you want to develop your writing skills you should write essays. Writing essays is one of the best ways to develop writing skills I've known. Do it my friend, and as soon as possible you will see the overcome.
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Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
- Will Durant

[Elliott]

Hello,

Thank you for your tip. When I write essays I feel like I doing everything right. Then I go over the essay and I start to think about all the rules I have to apply........anyway I think I have a lot of problems. But thank you for your help.

Elliott

[Tomasito]

When you are writing an essay forget all the rules and just write what goes on in your mind.
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Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
- Will Durant

[Kitosdad]

"When you are writing an essay forget all the rules, and just write what goes on in your mind".

That's the way to do it Tomas. :) :)
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Tomasito]

I think so kitos. :wink:
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Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
- Will Durant

[Elliott]

Hello,

Well, most of the time it will not make any sences. But I am trying your tips!!

Thank you very much,
Elliott

[Naiverock]

Good morning, everyone,
It's really a pleasurable start of a new day.
Glad to see you guys exchanging ideas about writing skills.
Thank you, Elliott, for your commendation.
I think the right persons you should turn for help are Kitosdad, Richard_Jack and other friends here like Tomasito.
Am I right,Tomasito, you are going to help Elliott to improve his (or her) writing?
They have been here for a long time doing their best to stimulate english learners to write as well as help them revise and refine essays.
One thing I learned from them I think should be mentioned here: As long as you have been through a critical thinking about a specific subject, you will have a lot of words and sentences to speak out, to write down. In the same time, some help from dictionary and peers and teachers would be appreciated and indispensable.

Wish you all have a good day! :P
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