please anyone help me: Gaza war...

[Rajaa Doghmoush]

Gaza war
December 26, 2008 was a day that I will never forget it. I cant delete it from my memory.No one in Gaza can deny , how thats day very dificalt.Its Gaza war, the Isreali plans was raiding and bombed a lot of buildings in Gaza strip, in this day all people was afraiding.
The Isreali bombed the houses over the people head, so their is alot of people killed include children, women, men,old men, old women...etc.

please corret it to me

Please somebody help me and correct this sentences
if there is wrong grammer and writing
thanx to all
rajaa

[Torsten]

First you should read this: grammer vs. grammar

Then you need to clean up the many typos and spelling errors by using a spell checker. Finally, I suggest you use only words you know and think before you write. Also, this is a forum not a place for primitive propaganda.
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[Rajaa Doghmoush]

Thanks so much Mr Torsten for your tips