Should high school students have a job?

[Vahan]

Now there are a lot of high school students who has part time job. By the way there are some schools where it is required for high school students to have a part-time job. I think that it is very important them to have job moreover it is very important for their future career.
I think it is important for high school students to have a job because in that case they will be more mature, they will know how much they must toil to earn money, they will be more responsible, they will have their own money to spend and they will not ask money from parents every day. Besides they can enterprise parties and expeditions in weekends, without thinking about lack of money. From my own experience I know how difficult it is simultaneously to work and to study. But these are the best years to work hard.
We know that no one student is studying the whole day, and many of them waste a lot of time without doing anything. Moreover they waste their time in vein in streets, which is very dangerous not only for them; they can even become members of gangs. And I think the best solution for that is job, which will help them to avoid from being idle. Moreover they will earn money and spent their time in better places than street.
You can find friends from your workplace which has the same major with you and you can help each other, for example three years ago, when I studied at school, I worked in company as a computer programmer and there I found a friend who is also programmer we became partners and now we have our own company, since we know each other for a long time we know our skills very well and we can separate the work.
Taking into consideration all of these we can conclude with confidence that it is very important to have jobs during school years. And you can benefit a lot.

TOEFL listening discussions: What are the two students doing?

[Anniehal]

realy?! you own a company yourself??

I totally agree with Kito, it's better for you to read more before writing.
Some tences were used wrongly.
And building vocabulary is very important, friend! Good luck!

[Vahan]

Thanks Ann!!!