An essay a day: Why modern people live longer?

[Anniehal]

Thanks to the development of technology and the improvement of living condition, it is granted that modern people live much longer than they used to be. They can experience more changes, witness more significant inventions, and enjoy more qualified life compared with people in the past.

In my view, this phenomenon results mainly from the improvement of science and technology. Nowadays, most countries have an all-round personal heath system that provides better and acceptable heath care, especially for those senior citizens. For example, in my city most seniors are free to see the doctors or they just need to pay one-tenth of the original price . Moreover, the development of medicine industry enable people to get more effective medicine, and some serious diseases which considered vital before can be cured now, such as pneumonia and measles. People who got cancer would definitely die in the past and organ transformation was totally unimaginable. But now, the technology changed all of that. A lot of people survived from cancer due to the success implement of organ transforming.

The much more enjoyable and better living condition is also one reason of people's longer life. Due to the air conditioner, human beings do not need to endure the hotness of summer and coldness of winter, which undoubtedly improve people's living environment. Besides, we have more trees and plants around us that provide us with fresher air and happier mood. According to a statistic, happy emotion can help people live longer and healthier.

Food is another undeniable reason of human being's long life. In the past, human did not know how to use the fire or later they did not have the needed high temperature fire, so only raw or half-raw meat is available, which really has an adverse effect on health. People can not digest well at that time, which harms their stomachs and digest systems. This will shorten individual's life unsuspectedly and undoubtedly. Meanwhile, fridge contributes a lot to the improvement of health condition. Reserved in fridge makes food fresher and prevents existences of bacteria.
Living longer gives human being a great opportunity to experience more of the never-end-changing world, which obviously is exciting and enjoyable. It happens due to various reasons, mostly because the external better environment, more advanced technology and better food we can have.
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I have checked it myself.Hope there won't be that much grammer mistakes..
Thank you for your help!![/list]

TOEFL listening discussions: How many types of IMA passes are available?

[Richard]

Good morning Anniehal
I have made some suggestion.

[Musak2304]

Why modern people live longer? The answer to this simple question is better hygienic conditions, unprecedented technological advancement which has clearly entered in our lives. For centuries, ever since the legendary Ponce de Leon went searching for the elusive Fountain of Youth, People have been looking for the ways to slow down the aging process.
Medical science has made great strides in keeping people alive longer by preventing and curing disease, and helping people to live healthier lives. Average life expectancy keeps increasing and most of us can look forward to the chance to live much longer lives than our ancestors. There are so many technologies that had made our lives easier .Every technology have changed our lives, some of them in manner more aggressive than other. It's hard to point out to a specific technology and makes it responsible for the major changes in a life of person, because every one of us may be influenced by other things.
Earlier in 1990's so many people so many people died in this decade is that there was no available treatment of malaria,diarrhea,t.b .The advent of Information and Communications Technologies (ICTs) has unleashed new opportunities for the delivery of health services. These days education of health workers is provided to enable them to provide better care for their patients. Nurses, who, along with teachers, are some of the most revered professionals, are given the best education and tools to keep abreast of the changes that are occurring in the health field. New technologies continue to change the way things are done. Take for an example, Telemedicine uses telecommunication technologies to provide healthcare services over long distances and can be used to improve healthcare as well as enhance economic development in a developing country. It allows physicians to provide consultations, collect and share uniform laboratory data and medical records to provide health care.
Hence , Primarily reason will be of the advances in medical and science technology. Secondly, human have learned throughout the history on how to overcome the natural disaster and social issues. We also have a lot more information these days on how to have a healthier lifestyle.

[Anniehal]

I'll take it next week...nov 11th
ermm... I'm afraid to say that one part missed...
n I really appreciate what you've done!!Thanks a lot!!

"never-end-changing" was just accidentally came to my mind.. haha....

"as far as I know Thanks to (for good result)/ regarding/with regard to...due to=owing to=(used for bad result)because of(spoken)"
I've never heard these! That really helps! Thanks!!!

[Richard]

you're welcome.
I'm a learner, so ignore my suggestion whenever you feel the need to.
wish you luck, you are capable of getting good score in writing section.
Good luck.
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[Tomasito]

Hi Richard! I think people should not ignore your suggestions whenever you correct them, even when they became upset. Everybody came to this site to improve his English, therefore he/she must accept when someone correct him/she. 8) You are free to correct my mistakes :D
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[Nzuahp]

Hello Richard, how are you doing?

Though you are a learner, your suggestions and corrections count a lot here for someone who wishes to improve his or her learning skills especially in the writing section.
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[Tomasito]

Hello Anniehal!
Congratulatios for your brilliant essay.
How long have you been studying English?
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[Anniehal]

[Richard]

Thanks guys...
Everyone might make (a) mistake(s)...Let alone a learner
I tend to read all essays and while I'm revising an essay, I myself learn..whenever I have time, I try to check out my suggestions with some sources. (I think I will be a pretty good writer (not like a native-speaker writer though)

Thank you Tom. It's kind of you...
Thanks Nzuahp. I'm fine.(Just studying!) I hope you'll be fine. I know you are studying diligently too.
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[Tomasito]

I've started studying English since yesteryear. Throughout this year I've dedicated only in this languange. Do you have any particulary reason to study English? I mean, what do you want to do after you complete your studies?
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[Richard]

[Tomasito]

I don't know whether or not your speaking skill is better that your writing Richard? Can you let us hear your voice. 8)
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[Anniehal]

[Tomasito]

I'm from Mozambique. My country is situated in the southern Africa.

English is one of my childhood dreams. I always wanted to read English books and listen perfectly american movies.

Another important purpose is to become able to comunicate with everyone around the world. The person behind the picture is you?
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