It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who...

[Vahan]

I think that marriage is the most important thing in the world. The main desire for each human being is to create a family and defence it. Therefore it is very important to find marriage partner with whom you can create very strong family. There is a very nice saying, it is said that “The family is the core of the country”, which means that you must do everything to have strong family and the impetus for strong family is love and devotion between marriage partners. I think that marriage can be tighter when marriage partners are similar to each other.

It is better to marry someone who is similar to you because many problems between marriage partners occur when they have different views to some question. For instance my neighbours are new married family. Husband is very calm person but wife is very aggressive, however they love each other a lot but they dispute in many questions which will be very bed for their children.

It is very important for marriage partners to have similar interests. In that case they will never annoy to each other. For example if husband is very fond of football, but wife hates football and enjoys concerts. It will be tedious for them to go either football or concert together. Because in first case wife will get bored, in second case husband will get bored.

If husband and wife are similar to each other they will know each other very well and they can predict and understand each other very quickly. Moreover they will be happier.

Taking into consideration all of these stuff we can conclude with confidence that the clue of good marriage is similarity between marriage partners. And the family where husband and wife are similar will avoid from many disputes.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a bookstore sales clerk and a student

[Vahan]

Hi, please read this.

[Kitosdad]

I think that marriage is the most important thing in the world. The main desire for each human being is to create a family and PROTECT AND PROVIDE FOR it.
Therefore it is very important to find A marriage partner with whom you can create A very strong family.

There is a very nice saying, it is said that “The family is the core of the country”, which means that you must do everything to have strong family and the impetus for HAVING A strong family is love and devotion between marriage partners.
I think that marriage can be CLOSER when MARRIED partners are similar to each other.

It is better to marry someone who is similar to you because many problems between marriage partners occur when they have different views ON some questionS.
For instance; my neighbours are A NEWLY married COUPLE.
THE husband is A very calm person, but HIS wife is very aggressive, however they love each other a lot but they OFTEN HAVE DISPUTES OVER many questions which will be very BAD for their children.

It is very important for marriage partners to have similar interests.
In that case they will never annoy each other.
For example; if husband is very fond of football, but wife hates football and enjoys concerts. It will be tedious for them to go TO either football GAMES or concertS together. Because in THE first case THE wife will BECOME bored, AND in THE second case THE husband will BECOME bored.

If husband and wife are similar to each other they will know each other very well and they can predict and understand each other very quickly. Moreover they will be happier.

Taking into consideration all of these THINGS we can conclude with confidence that the clue TO A good marriage is similarity between marriage partners. And the family where husband and wife are similar will avoid many disputes.

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Vahan, this is a very weak essay, and made even worse by the total absence of ARTICLES.
You don't really appear to have given any thought whatsoever to this essay, and in an exam it would receive embarrassingly low marks.
Stop submitting essays for a while and start reading, especially the usage of ARTICLES.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Vahan]

Sorry kito but I can't understand you, I cant understand what is the problem, the structure or the grammar?

[Happytofita]

Hello Vahan,

Kitos point was that you should not start writing now. Do some reading and enjoy learning new things while doing that. You cannot run before you walk. Running here refers to writing, and walking refers to reading.

Best of luck.

: o)

[Richard]

I quite agree...

[Vahan]

Thanks Rich!!!